My Alpha Brother is my Mate
- Genre: Werewolf
- Author: Bosy Elselhdar
- Chapters: 87
- Status: Ongoing
- Age Rating: 18+
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"This is wrong," I said, my voice rough and strained. "I'm your older brother... we can't do this." I tried to pull away from her, forcing some distance between us, but my body wouldn't cooperate. The pull toward her was too powerful, too deep in my bones. She didn't let go. Instead, she tugged me closer, guiding me toward the bed. One of her soft hands pressed flat against my bare chest, right over my pounding heart, while her other arm wrapped around the back of my neck, holding me there. Her eyes burned with hunger as she looked up at me. In a low, needy voice she whispered, "Whether you believe you're my mate or not... I'm giving you my first everything tonight. All of me. Right now." The words hit me like a shockwave. Every single inch of my body-my soul, my wolf-screamed the same thing over and over in my head: Mate. Mate. Mate. The instinct roared so loud it drowned out everything else, every rational thought, every rule I'd ever lived by. I crashed my mouth against hers in a hungry, desperate kiss, claiming her completely. My hands gripped her waist, pulling her flush against me as I muttered against her lips, "And I don't care anymore about morals or rules or any of that b*llsh*t. I'm the ruler of these lands... and you're mine. All mine." I was completely crazy about her. Obsessed. Possessed. She was mine-every part of her-and nothing in the world was going to change that.
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Ok, so how many people are actually writing this book? I am extremely pleased that the normal grammatical errors,etc,so far have been absent-hooray. That pleased me to no end. It gets tiring having to correct those in my mind while trying to enjoy a book. I am disappointed with all of the repeats and the redundancy… again how many people are writing this book? If there are more than one then they should communicate with each other or at the very least read what was written before. Several chapters back,Mindy called Jack from the bar drunk I’ll As he was coming to get her, she met Caleb, they danced. After they danced and spoke to each other, Mindy became frightened. Thinking that he was stalking her, she called Jack again. At that point, Jack was at the club came in and took her to his house where he could keep her safe from anyone that would want to hurt her. Let’s not forget Jack told Duncon off on his way to the club -via phone. Next chapter: Duncon spoke to Jack, who was pissed off, but did NOT tell Duncon off. Instead he gave into Duncon told him where Mindy was (after telling her that he wouldn’t) and then Jack was gone… no longer needed, I guess. In this chapter Duncon watched Caleb dance with Mindy; Mindy no longer saw Caleb as a threat. Duncon threatened Caleb and Caleb left; Duncan and Mindy left hand in hand after he told her that he loved her. The next chapter was similar to the last chapter with more conversation between Duncon and Mindy. This chapter lead nicely into this last chapter. I am disappointed that the author can’t seem to decide where to go
March 26, 2026

