My Alpha Brother is my Mate Reviews

I did enjoy it he story, though at times it did get a little confusing. At the beginning they did say Mindy was adopted but as the story went on, it’s seemed that they didn’t know they were not related. The other relationships definitely added tension to the story, and my heart goes out to Xander because he had real feelings. I’m glad they got rid of Emma, she seems like a parasite. But the end is upsetting to say the least.

Ok, so how many people are actually writing this book? I am extremely pleased that the normal grammatical errors,etc,so far have been absent-hooray. That pleased me to no end. It gets tiring having to correct those in my mind while trying to enjoy a book. I am disappointed with all of the repeats and the redundancy… again how many people are writing this book? If there are more than one then they should communicate with each other or at the very least read what was written before. Several chapters back,Mindy called Jack from the bar drunk I’ll As he was coming to get her, she met Caleb, they danced. After they danced and spoke to each other, Mindy became frightened. Thinking that he was stalking her, she called Jack again. At that point, Jack was at the club came in and took her to his house where he could keep her safe from anyone that would want to hurt her. Let’s not forget Jack told Duncon off on his way to the club -via phone. Next chapter: Duncon spoke to Jack, who was pissed off, but did NOT tell Duncon off. Instead he gave into Duncon told him where Mindy was (after telling her that he wouldn’t) and then Jack was gone… no longer needed, I guess. In this chapter Duncon watched Caleb dance with Mindy; Mindy no longer saw Caleb as a threat. Duncon threatened Caleb and Caleb left; Duncan and Mindy left hand in hand after he told her that he loved her. The next chapter was similar to the last chapter with more conversation between Duncon and Mindy. This chapter lead nicely into this last chapter. I am disappointed that the author can’t seem to decide where to go

Trash. The chapters are literally the exact same but the story changes three times. I’m salty I bought the whole book. Do not read it. It’s a waste of time. The description of characters is changing constantly. The same Outfits are changing constantly. It’s literally the entire storyline is changing. I’m reading the same chapter over the course of three chapters and it is different every time. Not a different point of view either. Horrible author. Very upset. Stop writing. Jesus. Christ.

The only way I could do that was if you wanted me too I could come and pick it out and then I can go pick up it from your place or you could just pick me out of there or you could pick me out and I could just go pick up my truck or you can just come pick me out of there if that’s what you’re doing I can just come over there or you just have .

I love this book so far but I hate it whenever he does that to her instead of telling her the truth from the beginning like a REAL man should or just reject her so he doesn't keep giving her anymore false hope of there being a THEM!!! And also if you're going to be like that then do the right thing and let her go so that way she can find someone whose willing to step up to the plate since you don't want to!!! Plain and simple