Penetrating the Cold Ceo's Heart

This novel has the potential to do better. The names are so confusing, especially in the middle of the novel. It’s confusing because the names are so mixed up. It’s like the author suddenly decided to change the names of the characters and some of the names are not changed. The storyline is a bit confusing too. Ray is a virgin but he got gang raped by his ex boyfriend. It would have been better if the plot was drafted out right in the beginning before writing the story. The final revenge part where Ray got his revenge against his scheming relatives can also be better developed. Ray is an omega who is forced to become a stronger person due to circumstances. That’s something the author can leverage on to develop how he struggles to balance the revenge and his natural submissive nature instead of him just escaping and crying in his parent’s house. The sex parts are very hot and descriptive though. The author is very creative on that, I must say.