Penetrating the Cold Ceo's Heart Reviews

Great story. Confusing at times as some of the details were not specified and there was a lot of spelling errors. The storyline was so great and I loved the characters so much! Some scenes and lines were repeated and ran over each other so it made me think I missed a chapter or reread the same chapter but otherwise, great read. The emotion behind the two main characters was perfect and detailed so well, it brought their love to life for any reader!

Good so far, could use a little more spice and is a little wordy but overall enjoying it. Now some gibberish 80 words is a lot. Jjj jjj jjj jjj jjj jjj jjj jjjj jjjj jjjj jjjj jjjj jjjjj jjjj jjjj jjj jjj jjj jjjj jjj jjj jjj jjj jjjj jjj jjj jjj jjj jjjj jjjj jjjj jjjj jjj jjjjj jjjj hhhj hhh hhhj hjjj hjjj hjjj hjjj hjjj jjjj jjjj jjj jjjj jjjj jjjj hjjj jjjj jjjj jjjj jjj Bunch

This novel has the potential to do better. The names are so confusing, especially in the middle of the novel. It’s confusing because the names are so mixed up. It’s like the author suddenly decided to change the names of the characters and some of the names are not changed. The storyline is a bit confusing too. Ray is a virgin but he got gang raped by his ex boyfriend. It would have been better if the plot was drafted out right in the beginning before writing the story. The final revenge part where Ray got his revenge against his scheming relatives can also be better developed. Ray is an omega who is forced to become a stronger person due to circumstances. That’s something the author can leverage on to develop how he struggles to balance the revenge and his natural submissive nature instead of him just escaping and crying in his parent’s house. The sex parts are very hot and descriptive though. The author is very creative on that, I must say.

This novel is going fine so far ,I love the characters and I'm happy the MC's finally started dating but the author's way of typing needs to be improved cause half of the time the names are mixed up ,the chapters are the same as the previous one , and sometimes the situation doesn't evens makes sense cause of the constant errors being made but I make up my own understanding so far so good ig ,I just can't wait for the two MC's to finally start a family of their own

Enjoyed reading this, there's a few mistakes with names like calling Ray remi sometimes. Also when Ray marks Brian, it says Brian marks Ray but Brian already marked Ray earlier in the book. The book seems a bit rushed near the end plus what happened with the company they took back off the uncle, there's no mention of it after the board meeting, also what bakers shop are they on about Brian isn't a Baker he has his own company with his best friend Liam. Need to look back at some details when writing as it contradicts itself in parts. But still a good story.

Amazing read! In honesty took awhile to read due to getting the coins but was so worth it. Enjoyed the characters. The concept of the book is easy to follow. The only issue I have is it’s hard to tell when the topic switches due to no or little paragraphs. Other than that it’s definitely a book I will be recommending to people that I know who have this reading app and sharing the link/post of social media.

Novel is good but it has many mistakes. Can you fix it. . . .

This book's context is interesting but it lacks lots of things like proofreading, to avoid mistakes such as mixing up the chapters... You get from reading about something on the previous chapter expecting it to continue on the next one but sometimes in this book, the next chapter tells a different scene or act. Which is very confusing. Lack of enough narrative storyline, we just have to try and understand what the author is trying to say. It's frustrating as readers to pay up so much coins just to unlock messed up chapters that don't even make sense without adding up 1+1 on our own. I see some readers commenting their complaints but the author doesn't seem like she intends to change or improve. It's truly frustrating.

OK, I like the book. It was good but it was kinda all over the place. The names kept getting wrong. You need to go back in. You know go through there and fix all your mess maybe go back through and you know try to figure it out but yeah it was a really good book. I like Brian I like Ray. I thought it was cool. They had a baby I can go with that but like I said it was just all over the place it needs to the names need to be right one minute. It’s name one minute since his name and you’re trying to figure out which one’s right and which one’s.

This is a good story but there's a lot of mistakes in the names in the ook but apart from that it's into a food book I love that Brian wants to protectraybut he still needs to careful with him he's going to need alot of protection now is ex isout willtarget ray again just hope he doesn't cavern to hi. Or he will regret it so much but I think k that they do need to move in with each other