The Rogues Destiny

I was really enjoying this novel and then it stopped. There is a lot of potential to conclude this much better and not leave it feeling unfinished and incomplete. There are quite a few gramma and spelling errors so could use a good editing. In saying that the story line itself is very enjoyable and I appreciate that there is no descriptive sex scenes which I find very refreshing. The story flows along nicely was able to hold my attention and entice me to keep reading. Another 10 to 15 chapters to complete and round out Lyra's journey would be great, for example the battle with her rogue father needs to be concluded and her journey as a white wolf needs more work and then her journey to accept and become luna and queen would be great to fully round out the story line and come to a satisfying conclusion. Then I feel it would be a great story. And thank you that there was the option to watch videos to unlock chapters. Its makes reading novels much more achievable. Great little novel so far.