The Rogues Destiny Reviews

I was really enjoying this novel and then it stopped. There is a lot of potential to conclude this much better and not leave it feeling unfinished and incomplete. There are quite a few gramma and spelling errors so could use a good editing. In saying that the story line itself is very enjoyable and I appreciate that there is no descriptive sex scenes which I find very refreshing. The story flows along nicely was able to hold my attention and entice me to keep reading. Another 10 to 15 chapters to complete and round out Lyra's journey would be great, for example the battle with her rogue father needs to be concluded and her journey as a white wolf needs more work and then her journey to accept and become luna and queen would be great to fully round out the story line and come to a satisfying conclusion. Then I feel it would be a great story. And thank you that there was the option to watch videos to unlock chapters. Its makes reading novels much more achievable. Great little novel so far.

The novel is good I enjoyed the fact that it has a lot of writing in all the pages. It kinda left me wondering what’s next in the book. Is it just ending like this they didn’t get to mate and form a great bond. Overall it is a great book. Wondering if another will continue. I don’t really have much to say it’s hard to write eighty words when there isn’t much to say.

I thought it was well written, fun to read. I loved the characters and want more. I’m new to this site, so I hope there is more on this story. Thanks for sharing your talent with me. The storyline was interesting and I was really happy that there was minimal sexual content (I’m old). I think you have quite a future! Keep writing and using that imagination. 80 words are a lot for me to write, just thank you!

I enjoyed the story and would like to see what happens next. Found the characters well rounded and interesting 🤔 and all the various plot lines.would like to follow them up to completion and hope there is more chapters to follow up on the characters and see what happens to them. A bit disappointed that this book left with incomplete story lines. What happened to her mum.do they kill her dad and the rogues disband.why dose her dad want her back now 🤔.

Pretty good As far as the story is interesting The characters are definitely defined and you do not get confused Some things are predictable but this is normal within that kind of novel All in all I enjoyed the reading and it hooked me from the beginning I didn’t find errors on the story as in other novels where the author forgot his own story, but still are some mysteries to be revealed I would look forward for the next episodes

I've really enjoyed the characters and I really like the story. I was worried about reading it at first because of what her father did and im a victim of assault but instead of frightening me I actually felt a little empowered by Lyra she has alot of my same qualities and the fact she find a great mate made me have a hope I haven't had in alot of years and even though I have a hard time trusting people especially men this book made me feel good! Mahalo for that and being a very good storyteller. Aloha Lorrie

Enjoyed it. Hopefully you have more coming more more more more more more more more more more please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please. Liked the characters and the plot so please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please plea please please write more chapters. Thank you hope to see some soon

Very good but the ending was kinda strange. No closure really. Maybe it’s just not done being published! Very good book though! I enjoyed it and the storytelling was great. I really hope that more chapters come out because it truly is a great book! Fast paced and engaging story. I like the character development as well. Very good work. I love the imagination of the author. The book was very detailed oriented and easy to picture. Thank you!

I really loved this story and couldn't put it down. I hope there is another book to continue with this story because this book ended very suddenly and with too many things left unanswered. Why is she different from the other wolfes and heals so quickly? What happened to her Mother? Did her father kill her or is she still alive? Do they kill her father? Does she become the queen or the alpha of her original pack? What did her brother go through that lead him to defeat his father and take over as alpha? Please give me more! 🙂

Mooi verhaal. Goed geschreven. Het einde is onverwacht. Ik had nog veel meer hoofdstukken verwacht. Ik hoop dat die ook nog geschreven worden en dat ik daar een melding van krijg. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .