The Ruthless Alpha

Overall storyline quite interesting. Wish the writer had given a tougher heroine as her profession requires this.Too many holes in the storyline. She has no friends nor been kissed. Being a virgin is understandable. You mean in her profession she may have many colleagues but at least one or two would have become friends. A low level homicide detective will not be involved in big cases. Look the writer should have made her heroine tougher. Instead she gets emotional and has no self pride by allowing hetself to be a side piece. Why must she dress up like a old lady when she is only 24yrs. Frankly she needs a kick for acting like an idiot. Clyde is being true to his character and not much to complain about. I know this is fiction but we need to be realistic when it comes to such profession. In real life she would have been demoted, desk bound or even given the sack. Again I say the storyline is pretty good but having such a heroine messes up the whole package.