The Hybrid Luna
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Lindsay was abused by her pack members, thinking she doesn't have a wolf because of her witch mother and human father. She and her aunt lived in the Hill Pack because of her aunt's friend, Luna Gwen. Despite Alpha Nick's refusal to take them in, Luna Gwen insisted on keeping them in the pack. Because Luna Gwen was well-loved by the pack members, they agreed with her. But after she had died, everyone started to bully Lindsay; being an orphan as she is, no one defended her against the pack members who hurt and abused her. She was rejected by her mate, the future alpha of the Hill Pack, Xander Devance. After accepting his rejection, Lindsay left the pack and became a rogue, which led her to meet a witch who taught her to use her witch power. What will happen when Lindsay returns to the pack because of the former gamma she treated as her father and sees Xander? How will Xander react when he finds her mate, who is now stronger and more confident? Will the bond that they sever tie them together again?
Tris Larkin
Very good story, awesome plot. There was an abundance of unnecessary blocking out of words, it’s rated for adults, so shouldn’t require the censorship. Needs some editing to keep the voice from straying from first person to third person, and past and present tense. Editing would alleviate the odd sentence wandering and quirky stops in mid sentence, as well as a good deal of redundant lines. Despite the issues it’s a very good story. The writer did a good job maintaining the plot line.
December 27, 2024

