THE BROKEN LUNA: MATED TO THE CRIPPLED ALPHA
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Aria Thorne was born into a pack that treated her like dirt beneath their paws. Born as a stillblood, she was mocked, beaten, and branded “broken.” Her only chance at escape? A forced marriage to a fallen alpha whose scars ran deeper than flesh. Lucien Vine was once a man of legend. A ruthless warrior. A king among alphas. Now he’s a shadow, crippled and discarded by the very pack he once led and bled for. Lucien saw nothing but another chain when the new alpha—his brother—forced him to wed a stillblood. She was nothing more than one more curse. However, fate has a perverse sense of humor. Because the broken luna possesses a hidden ability that she is unaware of, and the only person who might be able to awaken it is the crippled alpha. Will they ruin one another? Or rise together and set the world on fire?
Nonie
I love the storyline, but the pace tends to be unsteady. Lengthy descriptions followed by a rushed explanation for things happening in the moment that could use more explanation. The conversation between Lucien and Varion for example, more could have been said or reasons from Varion with at least some evidence for Lucien to ponder about the possible betrayal by his brother. Something more that Lucien could consider or second guess during future interactions maybe? It is a great story that makes you want to know more, just some points are dropped into the storyline without any teeth to it.
March 27, 2026

