THE BROKEN LUNA: MATED TO THE CRIPPLED ALPHA Reviews

This book is a pure pleasure. I thought it was the usual werewolf story; not knowing what was awaiting me! The writing, the story, the plot, the characters, ... everything speaks to me. The simplicity and the ease of this love story is pure gold: two broken souls who find each other against their will and decide to walk that path toghether and to be each other strenght. It will allow them to grow from weak to strong and to advance toward their destiny. The last chapter made me cry but it was worth it!

So far I really like the storyline. It flows well and is an easy read. The author does a good job at making the characters believable and likable. I’m not a big fan of the main female character being a cry baby all the time though. I’m hoping that I’ve moved past that part in the story. It gets really stupid when the main character is always so upset and falling apart. It would be wonderful if the chapters were longer. Each chapter is short and it costs a lot of money to read every story on this app.

Loved the story, except for the sudden addition of the porno scene descriptions that started over 100 chapters into the story... it was really unnecessary. I wouldn't have read this one if that had been there from the beginning, but after reading 100 chapters, I was too invested to quit. The book would have benefited from one more round of proofreading, but the mistakes didn't detract too much from the story. Overall, I enjoyed reading the book. When the next one posts I will check the smut level and will pass if it's like the end of this one.

This is the sort of novel that I like the most. To see the underling find their courage and resolve and begin to fight back is just what I want in this type of story. I love to see the bullies get their just desserts and find out what is coming to them. They deserve every punishment that they will receive and more. Of course if a good love story is also involved for the poor beaten down victim then that is even better.

I am really interested in this Novel, "The Broken Luna". I enjoy that is not full blow sexual, as not every novel needs to be so. I am also enjoying the different points of view. And so far, there haven't been really noticeable mistakes. That's new for me in the Novels from this app. I am quite enjoying this story line, even if it's not completely different than many others. At the moment I'm only reading 5 to 6 chapters a day, but soon I'll be able to buy a few more... EDIT: I'm done now, just finished it. There are a few loose ends, and the end felt really sudden. But I think that's mostly because the last chapters were a bit more fast paced. I'm off to see if the author really wrote another book in the same world like promised...

This is a refreshing story and it emphasizes a slow and steady love story - not necessarily by choice or bond, but by circumstances and need. Two traumatized people with complicated histories are made to marry/mate. They are both surprised with the comfort, trust, and camaraderie that they share. I’m excited to learn what secrets are going to be discovered. And I’m looking forward to Aria and Lucien being restored to their full power and destiny as they continue on the journey.

So far this is a great novel. I’m waiting for Aria and Lucien to have their come up and to prove to everyone who looked down on them that they were wrong. I’m curious if Rose really is Aria’s friend or if she is someone that is working with a different Clawhold. I like that this is a bit different from all the other wolf stories. They have different terminology to Learn so that is refreshing. I am interested to continue to read more

One of the few apps where you can read casually and it not cost a bunch. The stories are written well. There are not a huge amount of errors in the spelling or punctuation that make reading hard like in other apps. The chapters do reduce in page numbers as you get higher in numbers. That is probably the one thing that is keeping my review from being a 5 star. 8 page chapter to 4bpage chapters and the price goes up.

I really like this novel I think it's heartfelt emotional and makes me want to keep reading it. I really like the chemistry of the main characters in The Passion. It's very intense but also romantic and beautiful! I have found every chapter exciting and can't wait to get to the next. It's very exciting the book is full of romance and passion but also intense relationships and dramatic past history that plays into where I currently am in the book is very exciting.

It’s an interesting story line so far (I am on chapter 41 at the time of this review). It could have some typos fixed though. We will see how Aria’s power begins to develop and what it means. I really do not like the twins, but Rose is a bright spot. I want to hear more about Aria’s herb skills too. I’m not sure where the war story line is going to go, but I do think it was the brother that set up the ambush.