SLAPPED THE MAFIA BOSS
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“Please, let me go…” I cried while he kept walking forward towards me, making me shiver more. While his eyes fixated on me, he brought the cigarette to his lips and inhaled deeply while I gulped. As he exhaled, a slow stream of smoke escaped his lips, dissipating into the air and he started, “You shouldn’t have done that… You did a big mistake” “I am sorry…” I cried again and shook my head. “It’s done. It’s time for the punishment now…” He said and my heart skipped a beat. . Allison Wesley was living a normal life as a journalist until she gets involved into a task which leads her to slap the mafia boss in town. Her one mistake gets her life upside down as she enters the world of thrill, excitement, passion and danger. Read on to find out more!
Denise
Very disjointed the author seemed unclear where the story was going in places. There was all the usual grammar and spelling mistakes throughout, these could have been avoided quite easily if spell check had been used. If authors would just stop and think about there readers for once and do away with the ridiculously short chapters and put in chapters that you can get your teeth into instead of a new chapter every two minutes and let us enjoy
February 5, 2025

