Mafia's Angel
- Genre: Romance
- Author: Persephone's pride
- Chapters: 90
- Status: Ongoing
- Age Rating: 18+
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- ⭐ 7.5
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Who is allowed to be your bully?"he whispered as if asking her to reveal a secret between both of them. "You are m-my bully?" Rose said more or less confirming the answer. She tilted her head slightly, a pout morphing on her face as she looked at the male who caused the world population to scatter away in fear. "And you have to do whatever I say." Rose scrunched her nose in confusion, knowing Ares since they were children. She had always known that she had to do a task if he commands her to, but why was he repeating this infront of the whole school? "Come here." he motioned the chocolate-eyed girl closer to him, his hands gently smoothing down her blue skirt which was ruffled. "Bow down your head Rose." as soon as the girl tilted her head down, her jet black hair shining in sunlight as she adorably fiddled with the golden button on his coat, soft kisses rained down her head decorated in a braid. Gasps were heard all around. And it was the claim enough, declaring to the world that to whom the innocent girl belonged to ARES.
Nana Lee
I like that it has a lot of fluff and the plot is good, I just feel like it has a lot of typos that need to be fixed. Currently on chapter 42.. would want to see from Ares point of view a bit more. Though the story is fluffy it needs more solid ground on how things are explained clearly. Spoiler_ Like chapter 36 or 37 when she tells rora who she likes and she gets lost and stuff, that could’ve had like a better writing style and get us through why she did that and what are her thoughts through the whole situation, instead of them already finding her and she explaining afterwards. I know she’s very vulnerable and soft, but even her character could have some development, she could always be soft but we as the readers need to see some development in her vulnerability. Everything about the story is good, in my opinion author tried their best in bringing the fluff out a lot, like who wouldn’t want to be treated like rose while she’s pregnant! Plus the smut is also good.
July 6, 2024

