Mafia's Angel Reviews

I like that it has a lot of fluff and the plot is good, I just feel like it has a lot of typos that need to be fixed. Currently on chapter 42.. would want to see from Ares point of view a bit more. Though the story is fluffy it needs more solid ground on how things are explained clearly. Spoiler_ Like chapter 36 or 37 when she tells rora who she likes and she gets lost and stuff, that could’ve had like a better writing style and get us through why she did that and what are her thoughts through the whole situation, instead of them already finding her and she explaining afterwards. I know she’s very vulnerable and soft, but even her character could have some development, she could always be soft but we as the readers need to see some development in her vulnerability. Everything about the story is good, in my opinion author tried their best in bringing the fluff out a lot, like who wouldn’t want to be treated like rose while she’s pregnant! Plus the smut is also good.

This book is really good, just some of the chapters seem as though they do not go with the previous one. The words are not necessarily accurate with some of the sentences. You can definitely tell the person who wrote this is a different speaking language than English, which is fine. I am pretty sure they used google translate for the sentences at least that is what it seems like. When I took Spanish in school that’s how I passed but my sentences sounded weird

I’m going crazy with how just doll like she is. He’s a Mafia King and she cry’s at the drop of a hat. He’s gonna have to toughen her up. Cause glass breaks. And in their world glass is always broken. Hopefully she doesn’t have to go thru torture for her to toughen up. I hope she knows that’s not real life and he knows that she will fall and hard. It’s not bad though