
The Return of The Ashen Flame
- Genre: Fantasy
- Author: Appiah Paul Olives
- Chapters: 133
- Status: Completed
- Age Rating: 18+
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Seventeen years ago, the Ember Queen was consumed by her own fire—and with her, the last hope of rebellion vanished. Her name was erased. Magic was outlawed. Peace came at the price of blood and silence. Now, a girl awakens in the desert with no name, no past... and fire crackling in her veins. Branded with the forbidden mark of the flame, she is hunted by the very kingdom that once crowned her people. Some call her a myth reborn. Others, a spark meant to reignite war. Kalen Vale is the kingdom’s sharpest blade—trained to find and end her. But what happens when the weapon he’s sworn to destroy turns out to be just a lost girl… one whose fire may be the key to the truth he’s been running from? As rebellion simmers and long-dead gods stir, the past begins to burn its way into the present. She was never meant to survive. Now, she may be the one who sets the world ablaze.
Chapter 1: Scorched Silence
The setting sun bled across the desert, casting the ravaged caravan in crimson hues. Embers danced in the still air, mingling with the oppressive heat. The desert sprawled, an infinite wasteland devoid of life. All that remained of the caravan was the bitter stench of burnt wood, a grim epitaph for what had perished. Debris painted a ghostly tableau of ruin against the arid earth, leaving only charred remains and a choking pall of smoke.
Amidst this devastation, a girl stirred. Half-buried beneath the wreckage, she had miraculously survived the inferno unscathed.
Her clothes were shredded, her skin smudged with soot and blood, yet she lived. Each breath was a defiant act. Where she should have been consumed by flames, spared not even the agony of her last screams, she was, in fact, untouched.
She was nameless, unknown.
Captain Loric Rane, a man forged in the crucible of death, found her. His hands, betraying no tremor, carefully extracted her from the wreckage. He paused, however, at the mark seared into her flesh: a flame sigil wreathed in thorns. A relic from the Ember Queen's reign—a mark that many believed had vanished with her fall seventeen years prior.
Whispers spoke of its power to topple kingdoms.
Recognition twisted Loric's guy with a cold dread. He felt his heart clench. Bound by unconsciousness, she offered no resistance as he lifted her from the ashes of what was once a bustling caravan. In the surrounding hush, her name remained unspoken, an enigma too profound for simple utterance, a danger far outweighing her frail frame.
No one dared ask of her past. Her mere presence conjured a barrage of unvoiced questions. Even the observing soldiers knew better than to speak of what they had witnessed.
For days, she was held captive in a tightly guarded cart. The silence among her captors was palpable, heavy with unspoken fears
The journey north was a relentless stretch of rutted road, punctuated only by the creaks of the wagon. The girl remained unresponsive, stirring only when the cart halted. Her eyes would occasionally flutter open, her gaze distant, as if her mind had taken flight.
Her name remained unspoken.
The sigil on her breast pulsed with an eerie light each time the sun struck it, keeping the soldiers on edge. The symbol represented resistance, a bitter reminder of something that should have been extinguished.
As Blackridge fortress loomed on the horizon, the soldiers gripped their weapons more tightly, anticipation thick in the air. The order was to keep her alive, but for how long?
Outside the fortress gates, Kalen Vale paused, a knot of dread tightening in his stomach. Despite his years of unflinching loyalty to the Regime, this mission felt wrong. The air hung heavy.
Rumors had reached him of a girl bearing the flame mark, whispered to be the reincarnation of the Ember Queen. This felt like more than a task; it felt like a veiled death warrant. He remembered fires consuming cities, the screams of the helpless, the Queen's legacy of chaos that had been before his time.
Despite the weight of those memories, he would follow orders.
Is she here? Kalen asked Loric, his voice raspy with apprehension.
Loric nodded. In the cells. The mark is unmistakable.
Kalen's heart plummeted. His mission was clear—eliminate threats before they became dangers. The girl should have been an easy task, but the symbol of the Queen just did not feel right to him.
When she was brought before him, bound and silent, Kalen examined her with unnerving intensity. Leaning against the wall, eyes closed, she appeared more like a discarded doll than a living being. It was hard for Kalen to comprehend and acknowledge the grim reality of her presence in that cold, desolate cell.
Do you know what you are? Kalen's tone was harsher than intended. He didn’t expect an answer, yet she opened her eyes, meeting his gaze with unexpected strength.
The silence between them was thick with unspoken understanding.
I have a good idea of what they think I am, she answered, her voice strained. But I'm not who they believe I am.
Who, then? Kalen demanded, a hint of doubt softening his tone.
I don't remember much of anything.
Her simple words struck him.
Kalen leaned against the bars. You don't remember anything?
She shook her head, her hands clenching. Only fire, screams, pain. And a name.
Kalen's heart quickened. What name?
Their eyes locked, hers burning with an unforgettable intensity. Caelira.
The name dropped into the silence like a stone. Kalen recoiled. Caelira—the Ember Queen's name, a name they had tried to erase, a name that haunted their legends.
That name isn't meant to be spoken, Kalen murmured, stepping back, a chill creeping down his spine.
I don't know where it came from, she insisted, her voice softening, but it feels like part of me, waiting to be unleashed.
Silence settled, pregnant with unspoken thoughts.
Kalen wrestled with memories of the Queen's devastating reign. What if she wasn't the monster they believed her to be? A pawn caught in a game beyond her understanding?
He knew the world already feared her before even learning she existed.
You are not her, Kalen stated, his conviction wavering.
I don't want to be, she replied, almost whispering. But there's a part of me that feels it too.
Days passed in tense quiet. News of her survival infiltrated the fortress, fueling apprehension. The Regime prepared, discussing how they would handle her power. Kalen was tasked with watching her, but the more time he spent with her, the more he doubted everything he knew.
She carried a hidden narrative, shrouded in uncertainty.
On the fourth night, Kalen found her sitting quietly against the wall. Uncertainty washed over him. He had been trained to see threats, but this girl made him question everything.
You may not remember, he began gently, but you need to understand—you are seen as a threat.
She didn't look at him. I didn't choose this, she said, her voice fragile. The fire chose me.
I watched the fires consume cities, Kalen said, his voice wrung with pain. I lost everyone I cared about.
Then you know, she whispered. It wasn't my choice.
Her words hung in the air. I don't know if you are the Queen, Kalen said carefully, but I don't believe you want to be. Her gaze met his, understanding and pain mingling. He faltered. Maybe she wasn't a weapon. Maybe she was just a girl lost in a world that had already condemned her.
Three days later, the Inquisitors arrived, clad in ritual white robes, their faces masked, and exuding an unsettling grace. A cold dread settled over the fortress.
The girl was strangely calm as they approached, her eyes holding an emotion Kalen couldn't decipher. When they burn me, she whispered, her voice barely audible, see that they don't blot out my name. He felt mute, helpless. The world was poised to take her, yet he felt trapped. Not yet.
As the girl was led away, Kalen felt the weight of the past pressing down on him, an ominous storm gathering on the horizon. The fire that had started it all still burned. The girl is now a pawn between two opposing sides.
The question hung in the air: which side would she choose?
Chapter 2: The Sigil Burns
The girl opened her heavy, lidded eyes to an assault of the vile taste of ash: dry, bitter ash that bit at her tongue. It tasted completely foreign, reminiscent of a world she was too far gone to remember. And she lay there, her skin sore, and her mind echoing with the faint, almost believable sound of something: fire? Or something akin to magic? She couldn’t for the life of her make the difference, her mind was fogged. This feeling flowed through her bloodstream and beat like a second heart. Every breath was a blaze inside. Wrapped in the blanket of pain, her memories danced far out of reach, flickering like fire on the horizon.
She was rattling along a rough, broken road that bordered a wide, silent desert and a dried-out, leafless forest. It was a manly purple crisis upon the sky and stars, like an old wound opening and revealing its horror to the sky. The torches on the cart flickered fitfully and cast bizarre, dancing shadows in the chilly night air and ghostly whispers w











