Sold to the Prince of Hell
- Genre: Fantasy
- Author: ReadsByConnie
- Chapters: 108
- Status: Completed
- Age Rating: 18+
- 👁 914
- ⭐ 9.2
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“I will not let you take me alive” was the last thing she said before it all went dark. Watching both her parents murdered and their kingdom torn to ruins, it seems Leiya's life cannot get any worse, but it does. She is forcefully torn away from her sister and sent as a gift to appease Helion, ruler of the Kaltain Kingdom, the most powerful demon to ever exist, the "Prince of Hell", but Leiya is determined to keep her fathers dying wish. She will find her sister, Nayla at all cost, and not even Helion can stand in her way.

onlyalli
Okay. So I really love the premise of this novel, but I do have some bones to pick: -there is almost zero formatting which makes things VERY confusing. There are no paragraphs or spaces to visually break up the text, and the switching of POV and location is clunky. -the chapters are WAY TOO SHORT. Shorter than other books on this and similar apps. -personally I want more Helion and Leiya. I don’t care as much about Nayla’s story, and the fact that each short chapter is half about her is annoying to me. It essentially makes it so 3 pages of each chapter are what I want, and 3 are filler. It makes me worry that the story is going to take forever to get anywhere substantial. There needs to be more interaction between the main characters. I was plowing through earlier chapters but now I’m wondering a bit if it’s worth finishing, and leaving things unfinished isn’t something I do often. I’m crossing my fingers that any of these things can be resolved…. PLEASE! Okay! Now that I have finished the story, I will say that it is good overall. I wish there had been more detail and more actual time spent with Helion and Leiya, though. It ends well. My compliments to the author.
September 24, 2024