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I'm really enjoying the story, especially with the POV from both sides. I also like that it is romantic without crazy nonsense like other books. The characters are believable and true to life. Amanda is so cute, and as a character, just adorable as a teenager. Jayden seems ok, but rhe current plotline has me questioning his judgment especially with Kara. His full maturity level isn't there even though he is the older one. Overall, it is a fun read, and I can't stop wondering what will happen next.

I am absolutely LOVING this book so far!! 😭❤️ The tension, the heartbreak, the forbidden romance, it has me completely hooked! She’s 17, hopelessly in love with her brother’s best friend, who also happens to be her soccer team’s assistant coach. And just when you think she’s finally getting her happily ever after, they kiss on her 18th birthday! BUT THEN his ex drops the bombshell that she’s pregnant. ARE YOU KIDDING ME?! Fast forward and she’s finally at her dream college, UCLA, only to discover he’s coaching the men’s soccer team. After completely ghosting her, he’s gone from being the boy she loves to the man who broke her heart. And just when you think things couldn’t get messier, she gets a job at a diner and guess who her very first customer is? HIM. WITH HIS EX. 😭 The angst is EVERYTHING. I love that she’s hurt, angry and refusing to let him explain himself. I am absolutely desperate to see how this plays out because the chemistry is clearly still there, but so is all that heartbreak. I’m emotionally invested and I NEED answers!! 📖❤️

Easy read. Well written so far. I don’t know what else to write to get the bonus coins. It’s engaging and innocent. I like it. 80 words minimum is silly for a review. 45 words to waste space on. Blah. Blah. Blah. What else can you write? It’s good. I like it. It’s kept my interest this far. Sixty four words. Almost to 80. All this for fifty bonus coins. Wow. It’s really silly. Thanks.

Offside temptation This novel was catching from the beginning, each chapter ending, leaving me wanting more. Just a shame that between each chapter I had to watch adverts of some sort, being a none member. This meant I was constantly taken away from the story and I had to keep bringing myself back to it. The relationship between Amanda and Jayden is so sweetening. However, I was bothered by the fact that we never got to see Amanda’s mother’s reaction to the relationship and that we were introduced to Amanda’s mother’s new relationship only for us to not hear any more of it. I would’ve liked to have seen how Amanda’s and Jayden’s relationship progressed. For example, we didn’t get to see Jayden’s proposal and this is such a key moment that should’ve been part of one of the final chapters. We also never heard about what happened to Kara. This was slightly confusing as Jayden had just gone from pushing Amanda away to protect her to him all of a sudden fight for her. After Amanda’s and Jayden’s second break, it would’ve been nice to have seen a lot more yearning from him, it just felt rather rushed back into the relationship storyline. I also would have loved to have seen more of Ethan’s new relationship. We only have brief mentions of it but Ethan plays such a crucial role, he should have been more included into the storyline. This novel had me hooked, and although it had minor flaws and many spelling errors, which did annoy me ever so slightly, I was able to move past them and really see the heart of Jayden’s and Amanda’s story

I loved it! First of all it a great example with hard work you can become anything! Nothing is impossible! Practice and hard work! I loved Amanda and Peyton friendship how much they loved each other and how they contained their friendship in College… Amanda and Jayden are rare gems what they found… I loved reading every second of it because this kind of love is rare and you have to cherish it, especially Jayden went through a lot but if he just honest it had been easier still separated but let Amanda choose… Overall I loved this book!!

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The story definitely is a bit all over the place emotion wise. I some what like the transition of high school to college life though. Not too fond of the Kara character with how she is with the way she acts towards Amanda or how possessive she is over Jayden and also don't like the fact that she ends up pregnant claiming it to be Jaydens either... Curious to see how the story plays out in the end for sure

This is the first story I am enjoying for a while. Good to see someone actually be able to write for a change instead of the surface level AI rubbish that seems to have flooded this app. I love the sports theme again something different to make the story richer. I am already into Amanda’s story. Her dreams her sporting talent and drive and the pull to Jayden. I want more of his story. I hate that Kara is the complication in their story but I guess something has to bring the drama hey.

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Love this story Few typos but nothing I can’t read past ant not get the gist… It’s a seeet story that i think definitely has a twist coming re: baby momma I would have thought him pursuing a student would be a no go but …. I hope they get their happy ever after… I think I’ll look for this author again I quite like the content. Looking forward to her brother’s reaction and what happens with Kara