DANGEROUS ICE: MY HOCKEY NEMESIS IS MY SINFUL OBSESSION
- Gênero: LGBTQ+
- Autor: CYRA MCKENZIE
- Capítulos: 147
- Status: Concluído
- Classificação etária: 18+
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Sinopse
"Open wide, Golden Boy. I know you’ve been imagining sucking my c*ck in your head the entire practice." The cold floor of the locker room is bruising my knees, but it’s nothing compared to the grip Michael Rossi has on my hair. My mouth is stretched tight around his c*ck, my heart hammering against my ribs in a rhythm of pure, unadulterated shame. I’m the star defenseman for the Knights, the disciplined, untouchable Axel Thorne, and yet here I am, choking on the pride of my greatest enemy while he talks to me like I’m his favorite toy. ~~~~~~~ They call Michael Rossi the “Menace,” and for once, the media isn't exaggerating. He’s the jagged edge of the Rebels’ front line,a dirty, arrogant prick with a god complex. I’ve hated him since the night he stole my girlfriend just to prove he could. For eighteen months, he’s dismantled my peace, chirping in my ear and checking me into the boards with a smirk. Now, a viral "spite kiss" has trapped us in a PR contract. To save my career, I have to be his boyfriend. I’m supposed to play along with the man who ruined my life, but the closer I get, the more I realize the rivalry was just the beginning. ~~~~~~~ Axel Thorne is the "Golden Boy", disciplined, loved, and blissfully oblivious. He thinks I’m the villain who stole his girl; he doesn’t realize I only did it to see the look in his eyes. This rivalry was never about the game; it was about obsession. I’ve spent every restless night imagining how it would feel to finally claim him. Axel thinks we’re faking it to save our career. He’s wrong. I’m playing a game where he only wins by losing himself to me.
Shar
I'm not a writer, but I know that writing is a journey that has its twists and turns. However, there is a thing called continuity and character development that all good writers follow. Unfortunately, this book had none of that when it came to the supporting details. Axel began the book as a hockey player, then suddenly became a nursing student with no further mention of him playing hockey. It's college, I get it; nursing could have been his major, but that wasn't woven into the story, instead of being dropped in like a bad addendum. Then there was the brother, Gabriel, who I'm pretty sure started as a college student, turned into a seventeen-year-old, then an emancipated minor with no guardian, and ended the book as a young teenager in high school who apparently needed to take the bus to school. How was he getting back and forth to Michael's huge house at the beginning of the story? When did Michael move out of the house, and how did Axel's dorm room suddenly morph into their dorm room where they started the semester out with nothing? Again, rival team captains who were at each other's throats at the start of the book! The book started relatively well and steamy, but somewhere along the way it became this stilted, prudish (compared to the start) book that read like it was written by many different people who couldn't decide on what style and tone to maintain. Seriously, does no one proofread text or care about the flow of the story anymore?
July 26, 2026

