To The Highest Bidder: Mated To Alpha Lukan
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How do you survive when the only life you have known has been stolen from you? At six years old I was branded a murderer,blamed for what I knew nothing of and a slave to my cruel Aunt and Uncle. For fifteen years , I endured their abuse and believe the lies they told me. Until the day I was auctioned to the highest bidder: the arrogant Alpha Lukan. I thought being sold would only bring more misery, but instead it brought me to the powerful and mysterious Alpha of the Nightbane pack. He was ruthless yet kind , cold yet tender and seemed to promise me the love I have never known. But nothing is ever that simple. Why did he choose me? Why does he keep me close yet seem so distant, as if searching for something I can't see. But when the Moon Goddess decides to play chess with your life, you have no option but to move with the game. With every step I take, new secret stepped forward, eager to break the fragile happiness I have found. Now I must decide—am I just another pawn, or can I become the queen in a game I never choose to play ?
kacy carpenter
This felt like it needed more time to develop as I think, personal opinion that we were throwing s as little too many curve ball’s without a true build up. I felt it started out great and then it just got kind of jumbled together and not enough of something. Almost like there was too much being thrown together that it didn’t really flow together like it should. Keep working on your writing style as I truly think you have greatness in you if don’t rush it. Kudos for the read. You got this.
February 22, 2025

