To The Highest Bidder: Mated To Alpha Lukan Reviews

I like the novel so far. It's a good story, with a lot of twists and turns, I like it. But what I don't like is fixing the words and sentences in my head so that I can understand what did the writer wanted to say while I read. There are A LOT of writing mistakes. Be it a misspelled word or absolutely wrong tense. I am IRKED by it. My brain is itchy from trying to fix it. Sometimes I have a feeling like it didn't pass proofreading or editing, or the writer was plainly not focused while writing. Big fail for a good story and plot. Please, give it to someone to re-write it in right tense and spelling. Please!!! Save this book!!!

So far I have enjoyed reading this book. Quite a few typos have thrown me off a bit but once I figured out what it was supposed to say I wasn’t as confused about what it was supposed to say. Not liking the way Merida is being treated by her mate at all. Actually hoping for a plot twist and ends up he’s not her mate after all. I’m also hoping she gets her wolf back soon. Can’t wait to read what happens next.

This felt like it needed more time to develop as I think, personal opinion that we were throwing s as little too many curve ball’s without a true build up. I felt it started out great and then it just got kind of jumbled together and not enough of something. Almost like there was too much being thrown together that it didn’t really flow together like it should. Keep working on your writing style as I truly think you have greatness in you if don’t rush it. Kudos for the read. You got this.

Can’t stop reading this book looking forward to reading the rest of the book hopefully it will get better for her soon as her husband is a joke and this man she ends up with is not sounding to good for her at all hope she gets out of her position soon and why are her family or work colleagues not looking for her I’m sure I will find out soon just have to keep reading on we go

It's not clear but it's exciting! I'm after 40 chapters and I'm just not sure where this heads to. The lead female character is developing, the lead male keeps changing his mind and you can't stop feeling troubled. Sometimes you think it's for the best to be able for her to walk away and start a new on her own elsewhere. I keep waiting for the last straw to break the Camels back for her wolf to come out and her new start in life

Poor grammar, not enough explanation to be able to follow the story. The premise is good but very hard to follow what is going on. I feel like I am missing so much of the story that it’s just hard to read. One of the main characters is clearly troubled but with no explanation as the reason why I am losing interest in finishing to story. It would be a good story if cleaned up a bit more. Thank you

PG13. There are some twists and turns that’ll leave you shocked and mortified and others that let you know LOVE will prevail. Merida always deserved better but she had to realize it herself. The slow burn of her confidence boosting allowed her to find herself and understand that love can be many forms but most importantly it started with herself. Lukan had to simply trust himself and allow his true feelings to emerge to find his happily ever after.

There are some grammer errors. Some words are not the correct word, for example, "been" is frequently used for the word "being." The story line itself seems interesting enough to keep one wanting to read the next chapter. I don't have much more that I feel like I should say. To add more seems to me that I might spoil the story for others. I do not really have anything else to add to this review. Just keep on reading for now.

Well there’s a lot of disjointed words and sentences no one’s done spell checker or proof read it properly before it’s gone to print When different people are talking they should have a different line or even a different paragraph when as it just runs into blah !!! Im having to re read chapter to get a better grasp of the conversation Storyline fairly good but a bit prolonged I would have thought it would have moved further a long by now