
Bring Back Dr Luna
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“Goodbye, my pack. Goodbye, Alpha. You were the worst mistake I will never make again.” Alpha Xael of X-pack once had it all. A loving Luna, the pack’s own world-renowned miracle doctor and the glue that kept everything going. Until he and the pack forgot her worth. Until they betrayed her in the worst way possible. It is only when horror and doom befall upon them that they realise that only she can save them. Facing extinction, the pack will desperately call for the Alpha to bring back the Luna, but he is not even worthy to be in her presence. Faced with the realization that she was always out of his league and now no longer in his reach, what else is left to do? Can betrayed love be revived or is this the end of the mighty X-pack?
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Overall, an enjoyable story. There’s a bit of confusion with some of the timelines. The additional characters added towards the end, even though they are extended family, made it difficult to keep things straight. I appreciate strong female characters and Xena is no exception. It would have been nice to read about Xael’s and his sons’ reactions to the birth and toddler years of the twin daughters. Not all children born in to wealthy families end up spoiled, manipulative and immature. The scenes where their mother teaches them a harsh lesson seems outrageous when there isn’t recognition by their parents for their roles in the girls’ upbringing. Their sons are refreshing in their individuality. Xylon is a hoot! Thank you for sharing your creativity with us!
November 9, 2026
