The Bully And His Broken Beloved
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Cara Anderson is an orphan whose parents died when she was five and then she was sent to foster home which was nothing but a living hell for her. When a family decided to adopt her she thought maybe now she can be happy not as much as it was with her own parents but at least bearable. But she was abandoned and again sent to orphanage where she grew up. She is a girl who is not as bubbly and carefree as the girls her age but it doesn’t mean she is always sad, dull or low spirited. She just wants to live a normal life where no one pities her and most importantly bullies her. Because there is one thing which she can’t tolerate or even witness and that is Violence. Chase Adams Violence is his second name. He is most feared bully not only in college but in town. He is cruel, cold and dangerous. Rumours says he has been to juvenile center but reason is unknown. He is called soulless delinquent, monster and much worse. But does he care about it? No he doesn’t. He doesn’t care what people think of him. Not many are capable of standing in front of him and saying a whole sentence without stuttering, and he likes it that way. He likes seeing fear in other’s eyes, he likes it when people try to stay as far away from him as possible. But everything changes when a new student crosses paths with him and messes with his heart, his feelings. He wants to stay away from her seeing the fear in her eyes she has for him, but he can’t fight the urge to touch her, hold her and be close to her. She urges him to think about changing his ways which he would never ever do for anyone. She is scared of him and his possessiveness but she is the only one who can break all the barriers and see right through his darkest soul and cruelest heart, which he doesn’t appreciate at all. Will she be able to tame the monster or is he going to ruin and break her even more than she already is?

Elizabeth
Great story overall. Some of this was hard to follow and the writing could use some editing and better defined transitions between characters communicating. For example, some quotes from different characters were back to back with little spacing other than a period/ end quote. There were moments where I cringed at how Chase spoke to Cara; it was borderline abusive. I do not believe this was the intention of the author so I kept reading. The characters developed well overtime and I do want to see some potential spin off books for Chase and Cara’s friends.
April 24, 2025