On Her Daddy’s bed! Reviews

Oh what a steamy story this was. Daddy and Momma never failed to captivate me. At some point I also wanted to be under Daddy’s attention. He really made it explosive and I am really surprised that the steamy sessions could go that far and long. I also got wet wet wet just reading during their sessions. I’m happy that the story ended great for them. He always loved her but only realized later. And it’s great that the age gap was not an issue since they were compatible in more ways than one. 👏🏼

Very steamy story. Some chapers were repeated author shoild check that. Other than that love the story line. The best friend is weird and i know she will pop back up to do something weird and equally evil. I hope axel destroys her existence sooner rather then later! People are very scary, just want to be around to cause hurt and want your so called friend life i love the long chapters as well. So far so good! Cant wait to read mire

Ik weet niet wat ik van dit verhaal vind, op zich wel leuk maar de hele tijd dat ge daddy en ge momma vind ik eigenlijk niks. Voor de rest vind ik het denk ik wel een leuk verhaal maar ik moest wel even in komen. Soms is het ook wel lastig te lezen/ volgen vind ik maar dat kan aan mij liggen. Nou ja ik ben benieuwd hoe het verhaal af gaat lopen dus we lezen maar door :)

This books actually good and smutty- which i like.. it does have moments where its a bit repetitive, and there are chapters that repeated sadly therefore some chapters aren’t a continuation but a repeated chapter.. again that part does suck because ur basically left wanting to know what you missed. So i do wish the author would check on that and update/fix those errors. But for what it is worth the story in interesting. Sometimes i am trying to figure out what they meant because a word or two or three don’t make sense-but i don’t think it really ruins the read.

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The chapters are short and the grammar/spelling is horrid but it still tells a good story. Moving forward I would like to see the chapters longer. Also why are the pages only 3 lines long? It will cost a lot of money to finish this story. Seems a little absurd. It would be better to just buy a book with the amount it charges for the little you get to read. Also this 80 minimum word thing is ridiculous !

Well first of all WOW I loved this story,it started as Hazel was this young naive in experienced young lady,who at first I assumed was being used by Axel,yet low and behold he was totally claiming her as his,he eventually fell in love with her,the man without a heart proved all reader's wrong,best story I've read in a long time,od love a second book so we could glimpse into their future to see if he did allow her to become a mother to his kid's, amazing that would have been xx