
Submitting to My Mate
- Genre: Fantasy
- Author: Rebel queen
- Chapters: 175
- Status: Completed
- Age Rating: 18+
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- ⭐ 8.6
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"Riven Adams is strongminded, confident, loving and fierce. Everything an Luna should be. Zaden King is is strong, dangerous and ruthless. Everything an Alpha should be. ""Don't play with fire mi amor. You're sure to get burned ."" I knew his words were meant to be threatening but I took it as a challenge . I turned around and ran my fingers through his smooth hair, I pulled him down to my eye level, our faces too close I could feel his breath and his intense gaze on my lips. ""You can't get burned if you hold the power of an entire ocean."""
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Bit difficult to read at times and i didn't see the point of the comments and questions by the author , i found them intrusive and just ignored after a while. Was it to bulk out some very short chapters? The story was ok but i didn't really care about the characters in the end as they were pretty two dimensional with not much character development. Also some of the grammer was really bad and sometimes random wirds instead of tgd right one, so you had to concentrate to make sense if it at times
October 20, 2026
