Submitting to My Mate Reviews

This novel ha potential it started ok and started to build but it’s getting a little irritating that their is no real growth of character that it seems like the same thing over and over, I can see that it will get some where but hope it’s soon. The main characters are the same as when the story started together by now we should have seen some growth… but will continue reading as it seems like a good story eventually

Love this story so far . Love the maine caracters . The chapters are rether short but that is alright . I think that this is going to be a hart for them if they are nsot goin to talk to ona anather so i hope that they will for the sake of the pakk and ther mating bond . And i do hope that she geta her frend back so shehas somoneto talk to . And i do feale fo her she has no one .

I like the novel so far, I wish he wasn't the biggest jerk towards his mate. I know he loves her, but he could he treat her like trash that is under her feet that he can throw away, he said he needs a Luna then treat her right & she will let u trust u. I hope he doesn't go out & sleep around with other she wolves & that they fall in love with each other soon & not later, because they do love each other

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I am loving this novel I just wish they would also put in the alphas pov or thoughts in on the story. I hope he doesn't and is not cheating on her. He needs to pick a point he either wants her or doesn't. But she needs to do the same. If they just communicate and be real with one another than things would be so much better not just for them but everyone else. I also wonder about the lady that was in their office...what's up with her?

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I enjoyed the story thoroughly though If I'm being completely honest I got fed up with all the authors notes though I do get it you was just trying to engage with your audience a note after every chapter felt a little much but I think that's mostly because a few times I found myself confused only to realise that it was an authors note where my brain hadn't registered fully lol. In response to some of those though yes you definitely need to do follow on stories for the kids and other characters! Most definitely

Submitting to the alpha has many good qualities, hindered by both a lot of repetitiveness, and poor grammar. Along with this are many spelling, context, name, and conjugation errors. The base story line is good and fun. However the main character Riven, comes over as incredibly childish and stupid. Granted she hopes for love, but the way she acts and responds to him is very immature and ignorant. I’m still reading, which surprises me as by now I would have given up

There has to be at least a few chapters worth of the authors personal info and problems not at all related to the story. I’m not furious about it but it does feel a little scammy since I had to pay for it. I wish I could get credited. All of the Asterixs were getting on my nerves too. At the start it asks if you’re above 18🙄 no need to keep adding it all the time whenever there’s a mature audience related part of the story. Other than that and some language barrier related grammatical errors (not judging, I get it) it’s a decent story.

Their relationship is to wishy washy for me I wish they would try to communicate better but sure is stubborn and he needs to show he does care for her some it’s not her fault she was born after him so it took him so long to find her She’s jealous of Emma and her mate but she should tell Zaden hope she feels and get over all of the b s I’m glad for Emma trying to talk some sense into her