Submitting to My Mate Reviews

Bit difficult to read at times and i didn't see the point of the comments and questions by the author , i found them intrusive and just ignored after a while. Was it to bulk out some very short chapters? The story was ok but i didn't really care about the characters in the end as they were pretty two dimensional with not much character development. Also some of the grammer was really bad and sometimes random wirds instead of tgd right one, so you had to concentrate to make sense if it at times

This book is really good, really amazing, I extremely suggest all of you to read it, add this to your list for future reading, all the characters have very strong personalities, start now don't wait, i really enjoyed have fun, 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 thank you

I find three idea of submission interesting. I think that relationship s are tricky and when you pair werewolf and the idea of submission together it can be even more interesting. I am enjoying the characters and the story. I would recommend this book if you lijr werewolf fiction. I look forward to seeing how it works. Happy reading! Enjoy getting to know the characters and the story. It os definitely interesting. Enjoy ! Great read

Thoroughly enjoying the book, he is a bit of a dick though. I also thought her friend was a bit too different from when they met, she soon changed her tune. I'm loving Rivens bassinet, and Zaden totally needs taking down a peg or two, he can still be alpha and be different with his mate. I also can't wait to find out what this other thing inside her is and why her eyes turn red, is she a demon or something

I am just on the fence. How come that nothing are fated mates yet fighting and acting like strangers. Fated mates are pulled towards the other. They jell together and are bounded. Agreed that you want to prolong the storyline however not this hateful behavior towards one another. Why the delay in marking? What of if the other wolf has marked her or even gang raped her? What then happens. I am not feeling the story because it is unrealistic. The hostility is uncommon with Fated mates.

A captivating werewolf romance filled with tension, heartbreak, and undeniable chemistry. Riven discovers she is fated to the cold and ruthless Alpha King, but his lack of warmth and comfort makes it impossible for her to simply surrender her heart. I loved watching her stand her ground instead of accepting less than she deserves. Their complicated bond, emotional push and pull, and slow-building connection kept me turning the pages. A gripping, angsty read for anyone who loves fated mates and powerful alpha romances!

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I really love this book it's so nice but I won't lie you don't respect savage to slap her in chapter 40 6 or 5 and honestly speaking it was good it was good it was good I like how they usually developing but it's not going anywhere like from the moment the financial is generally not going anywhere she's like fights on top of fights and simple fights in this position and I'm just over to some extent so yeah

So far, it's grabbed my attention. I'm interested in seeing how Riven's relationship progresses with her mate. I'm also interested to see what kind of wolf Riven is. Clearly she's powerful and just doesn't know it yet. I wonder if more of her powers will awaken as time goes on. I don't like how she's being treated but I feel like it's going to make her stronger and the king will finally open his eyes and realizes that he needs her too.

Wasn't to bad but at times it seemed to go off and take a bit to get back to the plot. Sometimes with misspellings I had to take a minite to be sure I was understanding on what was being said. It was neat on how Rivens powers were and the story part on how that came about. I was very happy that Zaden did not cheat on her amd how they came back together. I almost stopped reading if the plot was going to go the other way. :)