Submitting to My Mate Reviews

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I am loving this novel I just wish they would also put in the alphas pov or thoughts in on the story. I hope he doesn't and is not cheating on her. He needs to pick a point he either wants her or doesn't. But she needs to do the same. If they just communicate and be real with one another than things would be so much better not just for them but everyone else. I also wonder about the lady that was in their office...what's up with her?

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I enjoyed the story thoroughly though If I'm being completely honest I got fed up with all the authors notes though I do get it you was just trying to engage with your audience a note after every chapter felt a little much but I think that's mostly because a few times I found myself confused only to realise that it was an authors note where my brain hadn't registered fully lol. In response to some of those though yes you definitely need to do follow on stories for the kids and other characters! Most definitely

I enjoy the story but there's lots of errors and the speech doesn't always feel natural, there are errors, so I find myself taken out of the story as i read a bit but the premise has me holding on to see if there will be a blow out or a wedding 👀 over all not a bad story if you can tolerate a bit of clunkyness! I'm new to these so im checking out several different authors right now.

Submitting to the alpha has many good qualities, hindered by both a lot of repetitiveness, and poor grammar. Along with this are many spelling, context, name, and conjugation errors. The base story line is good and fun. However the main character Riven, comes over as incredibly childish and stupid. Granted she hopes for love, but the way she acts and responds to him is very immature and ignorant. I’m still reading, which surprises me as by now I would have given up

There has to be at least a few chapters worth of the authors personal info and problems not at all related to the story. I’m not furious about it but it does feel a little scammy since I had to pay for it. I wish I could get credited. All of the Asterixs were getting on my nerves too. At the start it asks if you’re above 18🙄 no need to keep adding it all the time whenever there’s a mature audience related part of the story. Other than that and some language barrier related grammatical errors (not judging, I get it) it’s a decent story.

Their relationship is to wishy washy for me I wish they would try to communicate better but sure is stubborn and he needs to show he does care for her some it’s not her fault she was born after him so it took him so long to find her She’s jealous of Emma and her mate but she should tell Zaden hope she feels and get over all of the b s I’m glad for Emma trying to talk some sense into her

I'm finding it an interesting story but it has terrible spelling and grammar errors in it. I do not like that in some pages it repeats the end of the last page, taking up space on the new chapter. It's hard enough to watching countless ads to keep reading without having to lose progress by re-reading paragraphs on the new page. Luckily it at the moment it had captured my interest and I will put up with it. But if it keeps happening i may give up. I am so glad I didn't let the a pve deter me from reading this story. It was riviting. I have totally lost myself in this novel the past few days and yes there is some grammar issues but that is to be expected when the writers first language is not English. It was worth every Ad that I watched to get through all the chapters. Thank you for a novel well written. I am glad you made it through Covid and I am sorry for you losses during it.

I like the story line as its not the typical instant love story but I find the female characters refusal to even try to understand why the male character is behaving the way he is and is just so quick to judge and react, a bit off putting. In my honest opinion. I can appreciate her being wiery and guarded but trying to be less stubborn and cold could be better. There is obviously a reason for his behaviour and her trying to get to know him well enough to figure that reason out would be a good start to their relationship and would avoid her jumping to conclusions that may not be justified.