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Strings of Fate

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"I'm an ordinary waiter, but I can see people's fate, including Shifters. Like all children, I was tested for magic when I was only a few days old. Since my specific bloodline is unknown and my magic is unidentifiable, I was marked with a delicate swirling pattern around my upper right arm. I do have magic, just as the tests showed, but it has never lined up with any known Magic species. I can't breathe fire like a dragon Shifter, or hex people who piss me off like Witches. I can't make potions like an Alchemist or seduce people like a Succubus. Now I don't mean to be unappreciative of the power I do have, it's interesting and all, but it just really doesn't pack much of a punch and most of the time it is just pretty much useless. My special magical skill is the ability to see threads of fate. Most of life is annoying enough for me, and what never occurred to me is that my mate is a rude, pompous nuisance. He's an Alpha and my friend's twin brother. --------------------------------------- “What are you doing? This is my home, you can't just let yourself in!” I try and keep my voice firm but when he turns and fixes me with his golden eyes I shrink back. The look he gives me is imperious and I automatically drop my eyes to the floor as is my habit. Then I force myself to look back up again. He doesn't notice me looking up because he's already looked away from me. He's being rude, I refuse to show that he's scaring me, even though he most definitely is. He glances around and after realising that the only place to sit is the little table with its two chairs he points to it. “Sit.” he orders. I glare at him. Who is he to order me around like this? How can someone this obnoxious possibly be my soul mate? Maybe I'm still asleep. I pinch my arm and my eyes water a little from the sting of pain."

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Review after half of the novel

I love the story plot and I love how the book is going so far! I have found a couple grammatical errors, but I understand, because I have also gone back into the few short stories I have written, and have revised them so much that they are better than when I first wrote them. The only problem I have is having to pay for chapters. I am fine with watching ads so far, but as a reader, this book interested me so much that I wanted to read it to the end in one day. It is not often I find a good book that I never want to stop reading. My plans to pull an all nighter were foiled when I realized I had to pay coins for chapters. I just broke my habit of multi-reading (multitask reading where you read multiple books at the same time) and sadly I have started doing it again because I have to wait to get more coins, or wait for ads to refill before continuing the book. I am broke, have no job, living with my parents, and going to my first year of college. Keep writing, because one day (if you haven’t already) you will get a great editor, and your stories will be known. Considering I normally don’t read romance, this is great for you. You have an amazing hook and are on a great path to success! From a book lover to another, the best thing you can do is put an amazing hook to lure in your audience, and every now and then placing smaller hooks in chapters to keep that audience enthralled in your wonderfully written work. -Sincerely (Alias) Ruby P.S would write more, but there is a word limit of 300.

August 23, 2025
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