Strings of Fate Reviews
Ruby
I love the story plot and I love how the book is going so far! I have found a couple grammatical errors, but I understand, because I have also gone back into the few short stories I have written, and have revised them so much that they are better than when I first wrote them. The only problem I have is having to pay for chapters. I am fine with watching ads so far, but as a reader, this book interested me so much that I wanted to read it to the end in one day. It is not often I find a good book that I never want to stop reading. My plans to pull an all nighter were foiled when I realized I had to pay coins for chapters. I just broke my habit of multi-reading (multitask reading where you read multiple books at the same time) and sadly I have started doing it again because I have to wait to get more coins, or wait for ads to refill before continuing the book. I am broke, have no job, living with my parents, and going to my first year of college. Keep writing, because one day (if you haven’t already) you will get a great editor, and your stories will be known. Considering I normally don’t read romance, this is great for you. You have an amazing hook and are on a great path to success! From a book lover to another, the best thing you can do is put an amazing hook to lure in your audience, and every now and then placing smaller hooks in chapters to keep that audience enthralled in your wonderfully written work. -Sincerely (Alias) Ruby P.S would write more, but there is a word limit of 300.
August 23, 2025Sarah
Woooooow, Just woow woow. This work is captivating from beginning to the end. Couldn't wait to read the next chapter every time. Love each character and the idea of reading from their pov, the mis understandings among the couples put me on my toes as well. Constantly telling myself it's a book and i can't possibly go inside it to correct the misconception 😄😅 so so epic👌👌.Well done to the writer Great plot as well. Going to look for the author's other works to read.
November 12, 2025Angela Wallace
I loved this novel, this had the right mix of suspense, romance light comedy and action. I due almost wish there was said on Belmays POV and that there was a POV for Darrien. As well as a short POV of Tristians mother and mate. I hope their is a part 2 after Ryann and Belmay have married and if they have any kids of their own what their magics would be. As well as how Kiara and Logans. relationship develops as they get older.
September 2, 2025Cat Noir
Love the storyline. Male counterparts that are upfront about their feelings are the best stories! I hope they work out! The chapters are too short but because the story is so interesting, it's worth the wait! I cannot wait to see the culmination of their love story ♥️ 😍 the only thing I don't appreciate is that the female is a qualified pastry chef but never uses her skills because the writer wants to develop their relationship. Even the male as CEO is never at work.
August 12, 2025Oba
I was hooked from the beginning ! I was impressed by the creative story. The concept was something new and fresh. The author paints vivid pictures of some of the most memorable scenes that gave me all the feels ; ex: “unicorn pajamas and fuzzy slippers and when she follows the red string all the way to the cemetery and down into the ground” I haven’t finished the book yet, but I am excited to see how it ends, well actually I am enjoying the characters journey together and I don’t want it to end. I recommended this book to my friends !
July 24, 2025Erin
I really love this story! I can't stop reading. I just want to know what happens next! The characters and storyline are so compelling. This is a totally unique take on the magical being genre. I am enjoying the twist of Ryann knowing who she belongs with but her reluctance to tell him so things will progress naturally between them. I also like how she is learning about the shifter culture so she can better understand Bellamy.
June 28, 2025Little Lynn
It seems fairly well written. I could get into it immediately. I can create great pictures in my head while reading. The storyline is unique which also causes an allure to keep reading. I do have questions about certain aspects of the story but hopefully they will be revealed by the time I finish the book. I also think that Ryann’s reluctance to tell both Bellamy and Megan about their true strings is going to blow up. I’m a bit surprised that Megan hasn’t asked about a love string with Tristan. I would want to make sure I was making the right choice before getting married and it would be great if there was someone who could absolutely confirm it beforehand. Can’t wait to finish!
March 16, 2026Lilea
Really enjoyed this. Took a slight break when one POV finished. Love the characters and that it’s all about personalities and connection - which is what we all need, right? Apparently I need a longer review?! (Bit rude lol) I like that it had mysteries in it and complex relationships. Difficult family that ‘want what’s best for you’. Misunderstandings through lack of communication. Trying to understand someone else’s culture, be it human, shifter, witch etc. The importance of kindness. Learning to appreciate the gifts others bring to your life and the universal need to belong
March 16, 2026Savannah Thompson
I really liked this book. The plot didn't drag out too long and there was plenty of conflict and sexual tension to keep me entertained. The humor was perfect between all of the characters. There were several characters introduced and I was worried there would be several follow up books to find out what happened to them. Surprisingly, there was a HEA for everyone by the end. While I was expecting more "action" when I first started the book, I found that I didn't miss it. I will definitely be reading this one again!
March 15, 2026Anjali Sawarn
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March 15, 2026