Strings of Fate Reviews

I love the story plot and I love how the book is going so far! I have found a couple grammatical errors, but I understand, because I have also gone back into the few short stories I have written, and have revised them so much that they are better than when I first wrote them. The only problem I have is having to pay for chapters. I am fine with watching ads so far, but as a reader, this book interested me so much that I wanted to read it to the end in one day. It is not often I find a good book that I never want to stop reading. My plans to pull an all nighter were foiled when I realized I had to pay coins for chapters. I just broke my habit of multi-reading (multitask reading where you read multiple books at the same time) and sadly I have started doing it again because I have to wait to get more coins, or wait for ads to refill before continuing the book. I am broke, have no job, living with my parents, and going to my first year of college. Keep writing, because one day (if you haven’t already) you will get a great editor, and your stories will be known. Considering I normally don’t read romance, this is great for you. You have an amazing hook and are on a great path to success! From a book lover to another, the best thing you can do is put an amazing hook to lure in your audience, and every now and then placing smaller hooks in chapters to keep that audience enthralled in your wonderfully written work. -Sincerely (Alias) Ruby P.S would write more, but there is a word limit of 300.

Woooooow, Just woow woow. This work is captivating from beginning to the end. Couldn't wait to read the next chapter every time. Love each character and the idea of reading from their pov, the mis understandings among the couples put me on my toes as well. Constantly telling myself it's a book and i can't possibly go inside it to correct the misconception 😄😅 so so epic👌👌.Well done to the writer Great plot as well. Going to look for the author's other works to read.

I loved this novel, this had the right mix of suspense, romance light comedy and action. I due almost wish there was said on Belmays POV and that there was a POV for Darrien. As well as a short POV of Tristians mother and mate. I hope their is a part 2 after Ryann and Belmay have married and if they have any kids of their own what their magics would be. As well as how Kiara and Logans. relationship develops as they get older.

Love the storyline. Male counterparts that are upfront about their feelings are the best stories! I hope they work out! The chapters are too short but because the story is so interesting, it's worth the wait! I cannot wait to see the culmination of their love story ♥️ 😍 the only thing I don't appreciate is that the female is a qualified pastry chef but never uses her skills because the writer wants to develop their relationship. Even the male as CEO is never at work.

I was hooked from the beginning ! I was impressed by the creative story. The concept was something new and fresh. The author paints vivid pictures of some of the most memorable scenes that gave me all the feels ; ex: “unicorn pajamas and fuzzy slippers and when she follows the red string all the way to the cemetery and down into the ground” I haven’t finished the book yet, but I am excited to see how it ends, well actually I am enjoying the characters journey together and I don’t want it to end. I recommended this book to my friends !

I really love this story! I can't stop reading. I just want to know what happens next! The characters and storyline are so compelling. This is a totally unique take on the magical being genre. I am enjoying the twist of Ryann knowing who she belongs with but her reluctance to tell him so things will progress naturally between them. I also like how she is learning about the shifter culture so she can better understand Bellamy.

40 chapters in and it's pretty good so far. Good characterization, and the established rules have yet to suffer any violations that I've noticed. I'm quite looking forward to the future chapters and learning more about these characters and unique dynamics of the social politics of it all. I get the feeling that we're about to hit a chaotic scene so it's going to be particularly interesting to see how all the chips fall by the end of this one. Knowing there's so much left is wild.

This novel is so captivating. It drew me in quickly and I can't stop. I love the relationships and the care the author took into how everyone got together. The story has a great feel. It has everything you want in a book. I can't wait to continue reading this amazing story. And having to put so many words in this review sucks I can't think of anything else to say about this book I'm not even half way through yet

What a unique idea (colored threads connecting people/creatures, with the colors denoting different relationships), excellent dialogue that continues to gradually add more information about each character and who they are in the story, along with just enough intrigue to keep me looking forward to the next chapter! Who is Tristan‘s real mate, and when will Bellamy realize who his mate is? I look forward to the next chapter, and having all my questions answered, as well as a “happy ending!“

The story line is fantastic and unique. I loved the characters and the complexity the feel good community vibe. Was kind of hoping the support characters would get their own stories but the way it was done was satisfying. The only complaint I have is that the chapters keep getting shorter. So you either have to read slowly off rewards or spend more money than you normally would for a novel. TLDR, good story but expensive to read if you’re an enthusiastic reader.