Strings of Fate Reviews
Ruby
I love the story plot and I love how the book is going so far! I have found a couple grammatical errors, but I understand, because I have also gone back into the few short stories I have written, and have revised them so much that they are better than when I first wrote them. The only problem I have is having to pay for chapters. I am fine with watching ads so far, but as a reader, this book interested me so much that I wanted to read it to the end in one day. It is not often I find a good book that I never want to stop reading. My plans to pull an all nighter were foiled when I realized I had to pay coins for chapters. I just broke my habit of multi-reading (multitask reading where you read multiple books at the same time) and sadly I have started doing it again because I have to wait to get more coins, or wait for ads to refill before continuing the book. I am broke, have no job, living with my parents, and going to my first year of college. Keep writing, because one day (if you haven’t already) you will get a great editor, and your stories will be known. Considering I normally don’t read romance, this is great for you. You have an amazing hook and are on a great path to success! From a book lover to another, the best thing you can do is put an amazing hook to lure in your audience, and every now and then placing smaller hooks in chapters to keep that audience enthralled in your wonderfully written work. -Sincerely (Alias) Ruby P.S would write more, but there is a word limit of 300.
August 23, 2025Sarah
Woooooow, Just woow woow. This work is captivating from beginning to the end. Couldn't wait to read the next chapter every time. Love each character and the idea of reading from their pov, the mis understandings among the couples put me on my toes as well. Constantly telling myself it's a book and i can't possibly go inside it to correct the misconception 😄😅 so so epic👌👌.Well done to the writer Great plot as well. Going to look for the author's other works to read.
November 12, 2025Angela Wallace
I loved this novel, this had the right mix of suspense, romance light comedy and action. I due almost wish there was said on Belmays POV and that there was a POV for Darrien. As well as a short POV of Tristians mother and mate. I hope their is a part 2 after Ryann and Belmay have married and if they have any kids of their own what their magics would be. As well as how Kiara and Logans. relationship develops as they get older.
September 2, 2025Cat Noir
Love the storyline. Male counterparts that are upfront about their feelings are the best stories! I hope they work out! The chapters are too short but because the story is so interesting, it's worth the wait! I cannot wait to see the culmination of their love story ♥️ 😍 the only thing I don't appreciate is that the female is a qualified pastry chef but never uses her skills because the writer wants to develop their relationship. Even the male as CEO is never at work.
August 12, 2025Oba
I was hooked from the beginning ! I was impressed by the creative story. The concept was something new and fresh. The author paints vivid pictures of some of the most memorable scenes that gave me all the feels ; ex: “unicorn pajamas and fuzzy slippers and when she follows the red string all the way to the cemetery and down into the ground” I haven’t finished the book yet, but I am excited to see how it ends, well actually I am enjoying the characters journey together and I don’t want it to end. I recommended this book to my friends !
July 24, 2025Erin
I really love this story! I can't stop reading. I just want to know what happens next! The characters and storyline are so compelling. This is a totally unique take on the magical being genre. I am enjoying the twist of Ryann knowing who she belongs with but her reluctance to tell him so things will progress naturally between them. I also like how she is learning about the shifter culture so she can better understand Bellamy.
June 28, 2025Tami C
Loving it so far. It’s a little frustrating only getting 5 or 6 chapters a night but as one who has been know to stay up all night to finish a book, it is saving me from very really bad workdays. Love the friendship between Ryann and Darrien and can’t wait for Megan to finally open her eyes and see what’s right in front of her. Ryann and Bellamy…perfect together. Can’t wait till she finally stops overthinking and just goes for it.
February 18, 2026Visitor_3120036593
I absolutely love this couple! It’s so real. I’m only on chapter 41 but so far it’s the story of two genuinely nice people - who have their own flaws - getting to know each other and the missteps along the way. This one just makes me feel happy to read. I want Ryann to just tell all affected parties about their red threads and have them unilaterally accept it and have these lovely people all get together the way they should be. I love how in the story she understands the perils of that and keeps the information to herself. I keep thinking about her statement that fate will find a way and she doesn’t need to help it along. I wish I had that mentality in my own life.
February 18, 2026Stasia Spears
Great but takes a lot of coins, which means a lot of money. Would rather just buy the book than take 2 months to read it or 100$. Probably will be the only one I read on this app. The story is, overall, very unique compared with other shifter stories and is the only reason I'm willing to stay and finish it. I am also enjoying the characters, which are also unique from other stories in their own way. I would absolutely love to be able to just buy the book.
February 18, 2026Melanie
Cute, different story than just about werewolves. Chapters are a little too short. Hopefully will get more details and backstory. I’m glad the heroine is not meek, and tries to stand up for herself. Hopefully she will not always be so self deprecating. I also would like more information on the Shifters, their dynamics. Also I want to know what happened to Bellamy’s parents. And I also want to know what they do for work. I am required for 80 words lol
February 17, 2026