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Emily

Review after half of the novel

Very interesting. It has a lot of bullying and I hate the stepbrother so much like honestly who does he think he is like first you kiss her then rejected her and humiliated her and wants to get mad when she gets with Devin what is wrong with him. I am team Devin 100% and he legit fought for her and didn't give in. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

April 17, 2024
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SMS

Review after half of the novel

Interesting story but has few grammatical mistakes but in general the story is fine. Sometimes it’s difficult to differentiate between the characters especially the fathers. The real father’s character is not realistic and confusing the ideas are not well organised and I recommend to author to read the story again and review it. The story needs to be edited. Sometimes it’s difficult to understand whats going on and follow the plot. But I still like the story so far and trying to enjoy it and understand it. 👍🏻 👍🏻 👍🏻 the chapters can be longer considering the price which is not cheap.

April 12, 2024
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Na Chu

Review after half of the novel

Am loving this book it brings out the bad I like though the story is progressing slowly, it gets boring when they keep going in circles about their feelings but it wouldn't be fun again to just go straight to the point so keep it up . And am just trying to fill up words so that I can get the fifty coin bonus for unlocking the next chapter and am running out of things to say. Just a few more words and am done

April 11, 2024
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Haley

Review after the novel completion

So far, I have been enjoying this novel! The plot is interesting, and the main character, Emilie, is very relatable for teenagers today. (As far as her interests, I mean. Such as K-Pop, baggy clothing, etc.) It's a very interesting and intriguing storyline. Though, it is quite difficult to understand, at times. A proofreader would have been a lovely idea! I like how the novel isn't solely from Emelias POV. Meaning, I enjoy that it goes from Xaviers and Damiens POV, too.

March 31, 2024
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Sunyke

Review after half of the novel

Emily struggled in a confusing love triangle between Devin, the bad boy bully in school, and her stepbrother Xavier who bullies her at home. "You are mine, Emily!" Xavier groaned in raw frustration. He looked over Emily's shoulders and noticed Devin staring at them. Since his stepsister started dating the bad boy, his love and obsession for her increased as his hatred for Devin increased as well. I love when the characters are possessive!! Just not abusive or bullies

March 21, 2024
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Prsongbird

Review after the novel completion

I didn't like the ending. Too many unfinished parts. Like the story wasn't really finished. This story needs major editing as there are many spelling mistakes and parts where the gender was wrong. It needs more details in many parts so you can keep up with what is happening. I would have liked to see more sexual encounters in this type of story and have them be more detailed. The stuff with the dad was just weird and left unanswered questions.

March 19, 2024
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Cherie Barnes

Review after half of the novel

This book is really good really enjoy ing it liking the dynamic between the boys not liking her so called bio father he seems like a utter ass hole who thinks rules the world hope something bad happens to him soon in story as for the boys teenagers are all like that just hope that love can trump all and make them both the men that they are meant to be as for three Nigel he is just a jerk

January 20, 2024
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Kulsum Syed

Review after half of the novel

This is a very very very good novel i have ever read. I vote for Xavier, i don't care about others opinion but I like Xavier more he is just soo good to female lead. I usually spend my coins to read more and more chapters but i am not able to have patience to wait for one hour for each chapter to get unlocked. This series just makes me so unrest to read not chapter and I end up using your all my coins .

January 10, 2024