Vicious Vows Reviews

This is worth listening to. I feel that the story could move a little quicker but in saying this to date I have enjoyed the storyline. The characters are OK but the lead female to date is a bit weak and the fact that too many people run the pack with out requested by male lead. The bitchy roles are a bit blatant and when caught nothing really happens so repeat insults in other novels it doesn't happen that way. But still happy to keep going to the end storyline

The numerous grammatical errors is very distracting and makes it difficult to enjoy. Story concept is fairly common too with it’s ruthless alpha tamed by the love he has for the troubled mate. The poor writing is very noticeable. It’s weak on details, no complexity or depth to its content. Story needs more background and character building so the reader can understand and appreciate the actions taken or dialogue shared. Nothing that really captures a readers interest and holds it throughout.

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Loved the book! Great story! Didn’t see the end coming was very shocked! I would definitely recommend this book to anyone that loves a good love story! Octavia and Damien were a great couple. You could feel their love for each other. The author did a wonderful job telling their story. Wasn’t ready for it to end though. I hope there will be a sequel to it. So we know what happens in their future. Do they rule together? Do they have pups? What happens next?

Great story so far. Can't wait to see how it goes. Love the characters. Keeps you at the edge of your seat. Wanting to read more and more. And just when you think you have something figured out. Nope new twist happens. I really want to know how it ends. The fact that the Queen has powers is a great twist and why didn't she find out till after the werebears came into the story. Was a great twist. Really hope it doesn't let me down.

This is a truly awful story. The writer has taken zero care here. The entire story is littered with spelling and grammatical errors, plot holes, loose ends, and contradictions. I could not have enjoyed this story even if I had wanted to. And I really wanted to. It could have been a decent story. But it was absolutely butchered by some of the worst writing I have ever read. There is so much lacking in the way of important details and then there is way too much description of unimportant details. Its not worth it. Skip this one.

Proofreading would make it better. Plot is great. Story could use some consistency because at times it does get a bit confusing and I have to go back and re-read some of it. It would have been nice to know a description of the alpha beforehand just so the guessing of wether or not he was wearing a mask was because he was disfigured or whatever. Ummm now I'm just trying to get through it because it getting good.

I really loved the storyline. However, this really, Really, REALLY NEEDS an English editor. I found myself constantly rereading almost every single line because of miss-spelling or trying to find the correct words that would make sense. Octavia is a strong female lead with so much abuse in her background. Damien is so in love with her & trying to make her happy while struggling with how to communicate the proper words. This could be a beautiful love story IF it was properly edited. Until that happens I would stay away from this!!!

A great story, tho little mention of werewolves. We also never found out what Octavias powers were, which was a shame. I didn't foresee the ending for Maxwell at all!! I dont know who processed the story for the author but it was full of mistakes where you had to decide for yourself what the story was saying ie. tense, he/she....and there were repetitions and paragraphs out of place. It didn't stop me from reading it however and I got there in the end.

On the first part of the story, I thought I would not like it. I thought of stopping but then again as the story evolves, i get hooked and i do not want to put it down. I was just disappointed as some words are not spelled correctly hence I cannot understand what the author wants to convey. Didn’t this book undergone editing? Not only the misspelled words but the names of the characters have sometimes been changed from one particular word into another from a previous chapter to the next.