Vengeance of the Luna: My Possessive Alpha Reviews

Story became rushed towards the end. Lots of things did not flow smoothly or make any sense. The ending was abrupt and awkward. I do not think the author finished this as intended but rather had a deadline to have it submitted. It almost seemed as if a different person finished it even. u u i i i i i h h g g h h h h h j h h h j j j h u u u

Thank you for writing a beautiful love story. The author articulated each characters point of view very clearly, as well as the tenses of the time in which each scene is portrayed. I cannot wait for more chapters. Let alone her and sebastians revenge on her ex and his new Luna. I feel there's definitely something special about her and her exs father knows about it. Why else would he want her back as the packs Luna. Sebastian will protect her by all means. He's slowly falling foe her. Love ❤️ the story this far

A very exciting book and you dont lose interest in keep on reading. Just want to know more! You can really se the characters very clearly as you keep on reading! I like that the story tells the women is the clever one, and if it was not for her they would not win the competition. The only negative thing i have to say about the book is that it ended to soon. Hope for a sequel soon, thanks!

“That smart mouth is going to get you in trouble some day, Lily.” “What kind of trouble?” I just can’t help myself, it's too much fun getting under his skin. He moves closer to me. “The kind you can’t get out of,” his voice is laced with a prom-ise that sends a shiver down my spine. But I’m feeling brave and I enjoy challenging him, against my better judgement. I close the distance between us so that we are almost touching. “Is that so?” ========================================================== Lila used to be consumed by one thing and one thing only: finding the Rogue wolves that killed her family and having her revenge. But now, with the alluring and intoxicating presence of Alpha Derek in her life, her mind becomes occupied with a burning passion f