Vampire Alpha's Mate
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Iris only wanted a simple life with her family. Following the death of her father, her mother got married to the Beta of another pack and died of food poisoning. She is made a slave in her stepfather's house and as if that wasn't enough, her destined mate, prince Fenrir, rejected her. She is discarded as she wasn't needed anymore and stumbled upon the Alpha of the Silver Moon Pack. Now, in order to become Alpha of his pack, Fenrir was tasked with finding and accepting Iris as she is tagged a gift from the goddess because of the birthmark on her neck. How will he be able to do that when she falls in love with her protector and refuses to go back?
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Cute little story, but Finn is a bit useless to say he’s supposed to have all these powers, his remembered to use her powers and managed to save Anya, but he somehow forgot?.. he’s half vampire / demon and half werewolf but he barely shifts or uses his powers, he may as well had been a normal vampire other than the one point he used his ‘demon eyes’ to flick a switch? That didn’t make sense to me at all. I like Iris’s character but she would have been a bit more interesting is she had some sort of gifts that came with her destiny. She perhaps would have been more useful than her mate as well then. Anya was a little confusing as well. It was almost like she was bipolar and went from hating people to crying and asking for forgiveness every 2 seconds as well. I feel like it could have been a little better if the charterers gifts were actually used in the story and it would have made more sense.
April 28, 2024