The Rejected Luna’s Rise Reviews

Good story. I enjoyed the character development. There are a lot of storylines left open for another book. What happens to the half-witches? Does Damien get a 2nd chance mate? Do Ari and Knox have a family? Will the supernatural community come after Ari like the prophecy warned? Does Ari become the Alpha of Moonstone? Liam would make a great Beta. What happens to Donald? Does he become the pawn he was born to be for the witches or does he become a ward?

Congratulations on your graduation 🎊🎉❤️ I love this novel so far. It’s been hard for me to stop reading every time I start, so thank you. With Al the different relationships and crazy drama in each one it’s amazing and keeps me reading. Not to mention I was in a marriage similar to Damian and Ariana so it’s really kept me coming back for more. I’m so glad she finally got out but still Damian makes my heart break ugh.

Oh no!!! This is not finished, it cannot be. Where does ariana go does she become knox's mate ? Is she happy. Do they kill lily and family? What happens to donald the dangerous child? I shall have withdrawal , i shall need help😢really big congratulations on passing what i know to be years and years of studying and practical assessments . Be proud, be very proud👏👏👏👏👏☺️i need to know if riley achieves her top potential she has gifts that need acknowledging and training. Does damian finally grow up and become a strong alpha ? Will they kill all of lily's family ? Will ariana become a mother? Get your pen out. You have no time to work, you must create , you must write. Please🙏🏻☺️

Very well written so far. I have no idea what to write here but I apparently need 80 words to get coins so this is just a bunch of words that are going around and I’m gonna write them all up in the morning so that you know how I am doing and then I’ll write it up in a few hours or two or two days before you get it out there so that you know I

Im really enjoying this novel so far! I really hope she does find a way to reject Damien and be able to move on with her life. I feel like she is more powerful than she gives herself credit for. Damien doesnt see how manipulative Lily is and how she is starting all the problems. He is blinded by his love and need to protect her from everyone. Ariana deserves so much better and I applaud her for standing up for herself.

Oooo I love it it’s for everything you need tension, suspension and heartbreak and it’s very well written the author has done amazing with his the story processing Very well done author I look forward to reading the end and to reading future novels from you it’s truly a gift to write and let readers be right there in the story and not be bord or skip to something else Can’t wait to read more x

I like the book so far. These kinds of plots keep me wanting to read more! I do hope he can get over himself and own up to he fact that he loves her. That way when she leaves him, it’ll hurt worse. Honestly he should just reject her so she can find a second chance mate. I’m at the part where she finds an old man who was in similar shoes and was able to reject the bond.

I must say that I was not at all impressed with this novel for a lot of the first chapters. Damian was and still is the strangest Alpha Male that I’ve read about ever. But I did continue reading because I wanted to see if the story would improve. And I must say I have enjoyed the last few chapters. I am hoping now that this story continues as I would like to find out about what happens to Ariana .

The cheating talk, disrespect to Lilly is getting old. Why is he doing? I would just risk dying from the blood oath. No one wants to live like that. And chapters are too short. Just uses a lot of could dating the same chap. Like I said I said getting old. A few missed spelled words and missed phased sentences. And to write a 80 word review for some points is ridiculous. Should I just keep saying same thing Luke each chapter is doing. And starting each chapter with the last sentence of last chapter.

The book is very intriguing. The twists are somewhat unexpected. I truly appreciate that she doesn’t fall in love with the first guy that crosses her path after deciding to leave her husband like in so many other stories like this one. I would like to know some more about her brothers. How they are doing. What they are doing. Otherwise this is a pretty good read. The writing really makes you want to hate Damian’s father and grandfather.