The Rejected Luna’s Rise Reviews

Great story, but sometimes I am being confused because of the names being mixed! And a bit more attention to the wording and gramma, maybe you should have someone else to read and correct before publishing the novel - just an advice for better reading and understanding. The erotic scenes are a bit too detailed for me. However, there is still a great story - I am waiting for the novel to continue and looking forward to follow your writing further on. Keep going

Very interesting can't wait to read the rest. I wish they get to the truth, of who Lily is. She is bad but she's lying on the Alpha to break him and his Luna up. She's jealous and wants him bad. I believe she poisoned her late husband. All the Alpha have to do is tell his wife. Never keep anything away from her. Be honest and she needs to just use that emerald to get away for good.

I really like that story and am waiting for updates. I really feel for Ari and hope, she can get out of that horrible pack. Even her in-laws can go to hell, for all I care. Her only friend is Riley and Cassius is at least not as blind as her mate. They are fated, but it feels cursed for Ari. I hope, Asher and Adrian are not playing her. She deserves people on her side and really helping her to get out of that situstion. 😤 Looking forward to the next chapters. 🫶🏻

So this is a cliff hanger! 175 chapters and still have no clue how Ariana will prevail this HOT mess she is involved in! Don't get me wrong. This book is good but I found myself getting bored. There was things that didnt truly need to be there and things should have moved faster. I was hooked within the first 10 chapter but quickly got to a point I was looking for another book to read. But I made myself continue. Once I seen another 20 chapters was added I got excited because I was hoping the good stuff would happen and things would get into the meat and potatoes I was hoping for. There was a few to many chapters with Lily and Fred and Riley and Cassius. I get the whole lets get other people involved but most the chapters were unnecessary and dragged. I hope I will see in a few days more chapters that will conclude this story and see how Ariana will fair with this all and be free from her Alpha.

What was that ending! Not finished and a little 💩 how I am meant to write 80 words on this unfinished garbage is beyond me. I spent so many pennies on this. So frustrating and had so much potential. But why bother saying complete when it's not. 1 star and a angry face. So sad. Don't know if I will even search for a book 2. I hate unfished stories and it said complete. Grrrr so not happy right now I spent 2 weeks of coins on it

Interesting story. Can't wait to see who the traitor helping Lily is and how the story will play out. Things I've thought about: how long will Donald's mark last since edges were already cloudy and since it's based on a spell? Will Ari leave? Will the family try to regroup their old pack or join another pack? Are Adrian and Asher out to actual help, or do they know about Ari's wolf especially since Asher sees visions? Will Damien and his family finally realize that Ari is truly suffering?

So far the book is good but what i don't understand is there wolf how come they use cell phones can't they talk like all the books and if he did cheat how come she hasn't felt the betrayal like the old man felt and the Alpha is more worried about his reputation and not focused on his mate to many story lines lol but I understand you have to beat around before you get to the point and you never hear him talk to his wolf

Good original story, the alpha is predictably stupid. Why wouldn't he tell his luna what is going on? It's well written and the characters are believable- loved the fact that his sister is such a badass! The one thing that weakens the plot for me is that it is all because of his grandad - why does he have to honour his grandads mistake to the detriment of his marriage. The 'other's woman is a crafty bitch and I hope she gets what she deserves.

If you’ve read enough werewolf romance, you know the formula: cold Alpha rejects his mate, she suffers, she rises, he regrets. The Rejected Luna’s Rise follows that skeleton — but what sets it apart is the nuance in how it handles the Alpha’s character. Damian isn’t indifferent or purely cruel; he actually cares for Ariana, he’s just spectacularly oblivious and emotionally blind. That distinction matters. It makes the tension feel earned rather than cartoonish, and it keeps you invested in whether he’ll finally pull his head out of the sand before it’s too late. Ariana herself is a standout heroine. She doesn’t spiral into helplessness after being pushed aside — she pours her energy into her craft, becoming a legendary healer sought across continents. Watching her thrive independently, surrounded by powerful suitors while Damian slowly realizes what he’s losing, is deeply satisfying. What also elevates the story is the support she receives from her own family. In a genre where the heroine is often completely isolated, having people in her corner changes the emotional texture entirely — it feels warmer, more grounded, more real. A genuinely addictive read. Started it in the morning, couldn’t put it down.

This is a fun story with great characters, good friendships and shitty husbands lol. Littered with typos and really needs tidied up. But I made it this far for a reason and im gutted I'll need to wait to find out what happens next, i really wish the chapters were longer aswell. Ive spent longer with adds than i have reading and thats with purchasing coins(i guess an app complaint rather than the story). Im interested in how the author is going to tie all the plots together. Im enjoying the drama more than the sex.