The Rejected Luna’s Rise Reviews

It was a good read but I feel some parts were a bit drawing out bit like this is a book not a movie or a tv show but other than that it was a good book I enjoyed it . But I just feel like maybe if you do continue with the book maybe lean into the girl finding her wolf and she find a way to break the blood off with the male lead because that can make it good you don’t have to rush it

It’s a bit of an irritating read for me. There are mistakes or things not clearly explained and the stories getting G annoying… I’m hoping for an up. Anyways was i need 80 words. It's supercalifragilisticexpialidocious Even though the sound of it is something quite atrocious If you say it loud enough you'll always sound precocious Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious Um-dittle-ittl-um-dittle-I Um-dittle-ittl-um-dittle-I Um-dittle-ittl-um-dittle-I Um-dittle-ittl-um-dittle-I

Good story. Not sure I like Damien. I think the grandfather had something to do with the rejection of his granddaughter. Hate the way this story ended also. Why would you finish like that? It is not a finished story. What happens with Riley? What happens with Ari? Did Damien give her a divorce? So many questions but no answers? I am so confused about this story, what is going on and how does it end really?

The author has NoT finished this story. How is Lily’s plan revealed? How does Damien finally wise up? Does Ariana triumph? Getting this far and then bailing out of the ending is very disappointing. I doubt that I will invest again. Please have this writer finish all parts of the storyline so that customers can have closure. And being blocked from posting a negative review seems like a scam. Please complete the storylines that have been introduced. That is only fair to the reader.

So far, it’s okay. I feel like she’s going around in circles as a character though… I’ll update the review later, but I anticipate the woman she’s about to become. Her mate is a little slow. At first, I thought he was a jerk, now I think he’s easily used. Not all the time, after all, he’s an Alpha. However, “loyalty” plus a sorry situation… let’s just say, clearly his weakness. Bye readers!

Thank you to the author for this amazing book which will capture you and get your emotional throughout. You have a to keep doing what you are doing because this book is really amazing and you have something going on here, you can not stop reading even if you want to. What an amazing way of capturing the characters in the in the novel and all the emotions in the novel. Please do tell me that there is another book after this one.

It s st ill early on but so far it's a good read I th ink it's the first story line th at I've re aly go tten madd at like how stupid could u be if u truly loved ur mate then why keep hurting her but I can not wait t ill she rea lly bre aks free fr om him th en he'll be sorry but maybe not maybe he just likes to torment her keep her under his thumb but won't know till it's over

Damien is such a jerk. He owe his Luna loyalty not her. I dislike how he’s always tending to her needs and his Luna. He’s willing to humiliate her to please lily. I’m on the edge of my seat. He deserves to lose her because he did not know what he had. Don’t get me started on lily she is so manipulative and always playing damsel and distress. Always need saving and it gets tiring very quickly.

Would love to read more! I’m really hoping Arianna is able to break the mating bond! Curious to see if she hooks up with Dr. Asher! She deserves to have a second chance mate and be treated like the princess she is!! I really can’t stand Damien lol kind of bummed out how it ended. Really wish the entire book was uploaded so I can finish the whole book. Hate Lily too. Can’t wait for Damien to find out she was playing him this whole time!

I have enjoyed it so far. It seems a little drawn out but overall enjoyable. I am excited to see how this ends and I hope the evil little witch wolf gets what she deserves in the end. Damian needs smack up the side of the head. 😂 Definitely some grammar and typos, but those are things that can be corrected when you finish. I look forward to see where this story ends. There are so many ways this could go and I hope to see if you continue with a series to include other pack members.