The Lycan King's Breeder
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Talon the Black is as his name suggests. Dominant. Heartless. Ruthless. King of the Lycans, Talon is madly in love with his mate, Willow, but things start to fall apart when she cannot bear him a child. Driven to desperation, Willow begs him to breed a filthy human and while Talon is reluctant to, he does as his beloved wants. Abused and maltreated by her parents, Avalyn has been sold by her father to the Lycans. Her life is even made worse when she realizes that she is to be the Lycan King’s breeder. She is to sleep with him and carry his child even though he is already married. It is a cold business exchange, her curvy body in exchange for an heir, nothing more. But what happens once this ruthless King starts to fall in love with her? Can they hide their forbidden love from Willow or would there be hell to pay once she finds out?
Becky Schulz
I loved this novel. The characters are well-developed, and the plot is easy to follow. My suggestions are just minor adjustments. The numerous love scenes at the beginning between Talon and Willow were really a distraction from the main love story. I know you were trying to show their love and obsession for each other, but for me, it was just too much. Also are you able to have someone edit/proofread your work? I was able to enjoy it with the numerous spelling, grammar, and other obvious mistakes, but it would take your work to the next level. I will watch for further books. Keep writing!!!
September 15, 2024

