The Forbidden Luna Reviews

I was very upset by the way Sassy was originally treated in her pack. And Murphy does not even deserve to be called an alpha. His bata should have just fought him and took control. Sassy should have guessed already that she actually didn’t belong to that pack, but I guess some people are very dense in some aspects of life. Tamara should have never been unattended , allowing the mother and daughter pair to abduct her so easily. Glad everyone ended up safe and happy.

Not a huge fan of main characters name but that being said the story line keeps you wanting to see how it ends. Not super choppy either like some books on here. Major props for having the guts to post your work for strangers to read and review. Spelling has been correct. Not to graphic or sappy. Wish the chapters where longer because you really do get sucked into the story and characters. Just enough drama to keep you wanting more. Great job author :) thank you for sharing

I really loved this story! The chapters were short and went really fast! The characters were very well developed and blended nicely together. This book was an easy read and flowed nicely? All the trials and tribulations that each character went through were difficult but each one overcame their respective challenges! It was a good book and well written and enjoyable to read! I hope you find yourself immersed in this story, sometimes reading into the wee hours of the morning,trying to stay awake to see what happens next! Enjoy!

I really enjoyed the plot and the journey of every character, especially Sassy. I would have read more if they had shown Sassy and Alpha Drake’s progress. I was expecting Megan and the Matron to be caught and the other Alpha to stake his claim- I’m not really sure why I thought that would happen but it would have been interesting to see what his reaction was. I was hoping the matron to get more than her ending. I was also expecting David to be found and some sort of revenge from the beta. This was an enjoyable novel though.