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The Bully's Mate Reviews

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Szilvia Mikus

Review after half of the novel

I love this story! But if I were Ebony I would Keith work a little bit harder for me and to prove his sincerity. Truth be told that is takes time but I like them together so the end of the day I hope they can truly work things out between them. I love Ebony’s character how she is not giving up, how trusting she is. My other favorite character is Raven who is standing up for Ebony, how their friendship gets stronger and closer by day because of who they are! Curious about the lots of she wolves, Prince Jacob and everyone else!!!

November 9, 2026
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Stacy Lenders

Review after the novel completion

A story that has everything to keep people reading, love,lust,heartbreak ,sadness, happiness,Ebony is a true kind heart and deserves the best after being dealt a rough hand by her mother, Keith had to learn how to be a man instead of a f*ckboy. In the end everyone deserves family and the best ones are the ones you choose to be family. Jacob, Alissa, Raven, Mark , Ethan, Nathan, Abby , Tia are all interesting with flaws but honestly very real ! Loved it ❤️

October 28, 2026
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Cari Riley

Review after half of the novel

So far I like this story. The chapters are short which is annoying. But the story line is interesting. Although Keith is kind of a jerk. I feel like Ebony is stronger than everyone gives her credit for if she would stop acting like she is weak. But with how her mother is, it makes sense. I love her friends not Keith's so much. Alpha Michael should have stripped in earlier for her but that would have made the story completely different.

October 17, 2026
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Plant Lady

Review after the novel completion

This was well written. Characters are well established. Love the interaction between the main characters. Story of a great love out of ill will from class difference and someone being different and how social classes treats lesser class. Nice to see adversity win against the mainstream. Sad to see the interaction of the mother and how crappy she treated her daughter. Makes me sad that such things still execute I. The world. Would have liked to see the I tera

September 20, 2026
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Amanda Ijon

Review after the novel completion

Mostly a good read. Grammar leaves alot to be desired and names are misplaced which makes me wonder if it is original work. The ending is rushed especially after all of the repeat chapters. How many times do you need to read the same story by everyone's POV.. for a story that started out strong it had a weak ending. Also the flames die out about 2 thirds of the way in, we read smut for the smut not the story line.

September 10, 2026
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Susan Corne

Review after half of the novel

Loving the plot.of this novel. The ups and downs of teenagers finding there true mate and not knowing what their feelings are doing. I feel sorry for Ebony for what she went through and don't understand why if her mother hated her that much. Why take her away. The lying she did also didn't she realize would catch up with her. I hope she has a better life from now on and realizes that people will love her and not push her away.

September 7, 2026
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ICANTEVEN

Review after half of the novel

A good twist that the Father is the Alpha King. It will be interesting to read how she finds out and what the King will do when he finds out. The bullying ex girlfriends are getting a bit much now and her insecurities are also exesive now. I definitely would love to see the relationship development go a bit further and a little less drama. Keep writing and it is greatly appreciated the effort put into writing. Good job and keep writing! 😁❤️👌

September 6, 2026
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Natasha Canty

Review after the novel completion

This novel was great! The plot build up had a lot of twists and turns. Definitely kept me on my toes. A lot!!!!! There were a few grammatic errors that at times made it difficult to read. But overall it's a great read. The obstacles that Ebony faced in the entire book was crazy. It kept being in things after another. I'm glad she ended up being the bully's mate. She never would have overcome everything she's been through if she hadn't been mated with him.

September 5, 2026

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Review after half of the novel

I can't wait until all the bullies find out she a princess. HOPEFULLY when her real dad finds out he will punish them plus her piece of crap mom. Hopefully her mate stops making stupid mistakes and not listen to other people to do stuff. I always look forward when I can read more with this book can't wait to see how this ends.his parents are great parents. His beta is a little questionable. I do hope the ex gets punished by the king plus the girl that drugged her

September 3, 2026
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Ashley

Review after half of the novel

So far the story seems to be okay. I just wish Keith would step up more with the other girls that keep bullying ebony. Now I wonder how this thing with her father is going to go. Also what is Keith going to do to Ashlee for drugging ebony. Is her father going to be there for her or not. Also what is his mate going to do to her. I wonder what is going to happen to ebony’s mom now

September 3, 2026
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