The Broken Luna's Redemption Reviews

I am very sorry, story is okay. But it is so grammatically wrong and difficult to read. I understand that Aria suffered and was humiliated, mocked, unwanted and unloved but that doesn't mean that she needs to laugh at misery that others go through. The way she laughed at her aunt for the death of her daughter got me disgusted. Kalif is so patient with her, acting like a real mate. I would lock her in some basement for all disrespect.

So far I'm enjoying this novel. I'm really enjoying the comeback and womanly revenge plot. Honestly the girl has a sadistic sense of humor and I'm all for it and loving every evil, petty thought in her devious mind. I can't wait to see how the rest of the novel is going to turn out and I hope she also gets out of her way enough to accept the love she deserves along with the male learning to not be so overbearing and realize that he can be soft as well

Is an ok book so far. I had high hopes for this book but it hasn’t impress me yet. I really don’t know what else i can expect from this book and I am kind of disappointed but hopefully its get better the more i read. There is nothing exciting, no twist, it feels rush but it drags on some parts that are not relevant. I dont think this book is for me. Hopefully this book will surprise me before i quit reading.

This book is starting to get pretty juicy the beginning started off pretty slow. The female character was treated so badly to the point where she was prepared to do the unthinkable. The Alpha is a arrogant asshole was suppose to be her mate and treated her worse then anybody else. Then she had her so called aunt who she was living with that treated like a literal slave just because she felt like it I'm glad she's finally finding her voice, but I wish she would give the prince a chance.

I am interested in this story but the writing makes it a bit difficult to read. I am choosing to push forward unless I get too annoyed with the errors. As for now I can input my own words to help make sense. There are several chapters that are spent repeating and rephrasing the same thoughts. It is very descriptive to include describing locking a door🙄. But aside from the grammar and such, the story has great potential to be good.

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So far I have read through the novel is that it's quite surprising that it kept me occupied with the twists and turns. I do like the twists and the fact that it is quite interesting to go on. I did love to congratulate the author for good work and look forward for more books from the author. I would love to see more in the future and thank you for a wonderful opportunity provided for me to read your novel.

Overall a good storyline. The book has got some interesting characters.. however all the ads between each chapter kills the joy of reading. It slows down the speed of the story in such a way that too continue to finish the book becomes a : burden" instead of a pleasure. Noyhing more to add to this review I should say read The Broken Luna's Redemption and form your own opinion.

I struggled to give this book a good review let alone a creat one! The story is good and the storyline is ok with the characters but the grammatical errors and syntax, the lack of symmetry moving the reader from one scene to another is horrible! I had to often reread a paragraph just to realize the scene moved because the story didn’t make any sense. This writer also didn’t have anyone edit or review this work before publishing. I believe this writer young because of their description of certain scenes and the lack of communication and clear thinking by the lead character ; but…. Practice makes perfect! The story was good! So good I kept reading even with the errors. Don’t let this review stop you from writing or getting better! You have awesome potential. Open up your vocabulary. Read more books to see how to transition your scene. Stop calling her look and smile “ slutty”…you’re on your way to becoming a great writer… just keep getting better

This is an interesting storyline. I enjoy that Aria is vengeful and not some forgiving girl. I love how she gained some confidence and met the Lycan Prince Khalid. I have not finish the book yet, but I am looking forward to real what will happen next. It is easy to real, but you can tell some of the lines that it may be voice to text written. Nothing big, just wear is spelled where and stuff like that. I dont mind, cause it is easy to understand otherwise