The Beta's Temptation Reviews

I'm on the fence with book, it's good but something is missing and I'm not sure what it is yet. I think it's missing true power in Esme. She should be more powerful and end her brother and Cole even if he is her mate. A mate wouldn't rape you and make you feel worthless. He doesn't deserve her and I hope she rejects him and is finally done with his nonsense. I hope this book gets better sooner than later.

I have read several novels on this platform, but I have never had one grab me on the first chapter. Wow! This is a great story so far, and I wish I had the coins to just sit and bust it out in one sitting. A big th ank you to the author that has provided an incredible distraction to real life. If you are debating this story, don’t, just dive right in, you won’t regret it! Thank you!

Going into this story, I wasn't sure what to expect and sometimes that's a good thing. Twists and turns I never expected. No one is who they seem. I found myself hating certain characters but then found that hatred faltering as they did something to make me second guess them. Oh, the morally Grey character making me question myself! It's interesting to see a story start in one place but then end up somewhere you never expected. I like a story that keeps me guessing.

What an addictive read. The pacing is tight, the plot grows more complex with every chapter, and the dynamic between the characters is both heartfelt and intense. The tension—both emotional and story‑driven—keeps you fully invested. The mix of action, secrets, and relationship development makes this a steamy standout. I can’t wait for the next installment. Xx x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x

I love the way Esme has transformed and i hope Nolan secret will come out eventually and Esme be the rightful owner of the seat I don't know about Marek but I think he find pleasure being with Nolan and all the stuff they do.oooh Cole the best character in everything he does i hope he punish Nolan the way he deserves for fooling him all this time and be a better mate to Esme not the beast and manipulate he is righteous I hope he changes to be kind and gentle but I like his character and fear he inflict to those who are around him....Good Novel by the way