Slave Mate to His Luna Reviews

I. Definitely enjoying this book I like the change in character description it's refreshing. The first chapters weren't so predictable but once it came to Cairo coming into the picture I figured that out before it happened. Kinda predictable. Non the less still interesting. Especially him killing the kings parents... didn't see that coming. Oooo I know revenge is gonna be so great. But I wonder if the queen has so much power herself ... how come she hasn't broken free? She's more powerful to do so... well I will find out . I wil controlled read until the end. Great job.

Very interesting storyline. Lieke the twists and turns a lot also the intrigue. I found the angelwolf a very interesting concept, I have never read about it before and was very surprised. I found it interesting that somehow they manage to capture her even she should have enhanced senses and be much stronger than her opponents even though they feed her wolfsbane. I do like though how the girl that broke the kings heart ended up without a wolf. Karma.

I loved the story. I hated what they both went though, but I loved the support from each person. There were so many times that they could have taken the road that led to chaos due to the people around them being flat out rude, but they didn't. I love wolves novels and the bond that they feel for their mate. It's scared how it should be in a relationship. But like reality there are always those that do not respect that bond the either throw it away or break it. But this was a great story and was well written.

Enjoyed this book. It had the right amount of twists and turns and cliffhangers. However, a little more care could have been made in editing for grammer and punctuation. Did not enjoy having to reread some pages or paragraphs to figure out what the author ment to say in some instances, as this interrupted the flow of the story at times. Would have loved a little more personal interaction between the two main characters as they worked through and developed their relationship.

Butterflydiva, like I said before your book is great, you need to proof read before. There was a lot of mistakes and typos. You have a talent, but you need to be careful. It's great to see that it's a little bit different from the other books I've read. At times it was sad, when her father sold her to be a slave, her first and second mate rejected her. Then she found a friend. Finally they both found their mates. It was getting. It was a rough start. Next thing I know Winter mate was the alpha king and she became the alpha queen. That was a great twist. When her first mate came to the ceremony, he had the nerves to tell her he wanted her back. What she said to him, that was amazing. I'm wondering. Will there be a sequel to this book? I think it would be nice. But make sure to watch the typos. Great story!!

I love the book it's really good it's just some of the chapters are being repeated I'm spending money basically for nothing this is the second time this has happened but the book has you on your toes it's very real intimate but the main Characters I believe don't have a nuff Chemistry it's almost at the end of the book they still haven't marked each other I understand what she been through but once you said you was going to give this man a chance that mean open heartedly this man keeps giving and she still is shielding herself

Oh how I just freaking love love love me any kinda of dark romance dark fantasy high fantasy magic or reality fantasy mafia gang mob any morally grey or morally black plots and characters I just love anything in the genre because it adds the spice I like and is great w any kind of troupe added in for enemies to lovers slow burn cat and mouse forbidden love styles to be woven in which is just my guilty pleasure of a story. So I knew from the title this was going to most likely be a bit of me. So far I am loving the direction the author is taking the characters storyline and I can’t wait to continue reading on and see how the rest of the story unfolds.

I fell in love with the book I truly fell in love but then I was left hanging there's no ending I have waited almost over a month for an ending and there's none. It kept saying come back the ending is coming come back ending is coming now it tells me to post the review how can I review something never end . I would love for the book to have an ending the other book that I read was great. But it told me to come back for the second half of the other book which never happened. I'm about to lose my interest in the whole thing because I can never finish a whole book. Now they won't in order to review I got to have 300 words how can I write 300 words on something that I ain't even finished reading this is crazy.

It was okay story and something happened all the time. I only wished that someone had correct edit the book because there’s misspelling and grammar errors. Plus some words gets another meaning if you misspell it or the sentence gets another meaning depending where you place the commas even I know it and English is my fourth language and I studied three more after it. Therefore I would really appreciate if the author took their time to write more elaborate and then read the book for taking away all the mistakes, thank you

I think the storyline is really good, but the author really really really needs to proofread. There’s so many spelling and grammar errors that it’s eye twitching and I suck at both. Again, overall I’m enjoying the story, though it is a little predictable, but I’m looking forward to seeing how it concludes. Maybe the author will throw in an unexpected twist and shock us all with correct punctuation and spelling. I’m curious to see if the author has written anything else.