Rejected by my mate, claimed by Alpha Ryder Reviews

Love this story so much I love blade Julius and Ryder and Doris. I hate Lucious and Claire and all the evil ones I hope they get what they deserve. This is making me laugh, cry , get angry and scared all at once. I hope the bad guys die and the good ones win and we have a healthy happy baby boy they name after blade. I also hope Henry and Julius find their mate and can be happy and for Dora to be happy.

This is a good story but the intense hatred from the stepmother and sisters to this girl is just awful. The bullying and abuse by said three is deplorable and for the father not to stand up for his daughter is also deplorable. To believe his first wife was unfaithful by hearsay is also such a low act by his now wife goes to show that he truly didn’t love his first wife not to believe her. Now the poor girl has be kidnapped!

It was great but you can’t end it now. Who was behind Doris. It can’t end. The story involved me so much I actually saw the people in the book. But it cannot end now. So much needs to be said and done. Please keep it going. I want the baddies to pay for everything. They deserve every torture that can be imagined. The worse of the worse. Please keep it going. I need to know. I must say best book I’ve read I long time.

So far, I'm intrigued. The story seems to jump a lot between different characters, filling in bits of back story, giving readers good crumbs leading to the plot.

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This has been a fun book so far. The story is a little different from the usual abused girl choosen to be Luna. The plot twists are interesting with out revealing too much too soon. Keeps your interest from chapter to chapter. I am still reading to find answers of what happened and the past. Seems to be a few villains at this point. Maybe I figure out some of the answers before they are revealed. I love trying to figure out the back story on my own with just clues before the big reveal.

So far this story has a pretty good flow, decent characters but the ads take longer to get through than the chapters. Plus will someone PLEASE edit!!!! If I'm giving you this much of my time, you can at least run it through an editing program. Thanks, note I'm only on chapter 32 and I can see the groundwork for where the story is likely headed. It's nice that it's not glaringly obvious and still open to twists and turns.

Brilliant book gripped from the start I absolutely loved it well written and a great cast of characters and story line loved it will read more from this author It's a good development short read very in detail. I appreciate the supporting characters too. book easy to read and appreciate its low drama throughout the story. Five stars as always for imagination. It is nice to read a shifter book that varies from witches and rogue plot lines. So far all this books I've read have been very creative and variations from the norm. A very good thing

I like the novel but hate that I have to keep waiting a day or two for new chapters to release. Also, it can be hard following all the drama at times. So many things happening at once. But overall the main characters are interesting. I wish we could have had a new arc for Blade instead of what happened. This is the first time I have cried over a book character ever. Hopefully Julius gets a love interest at some point.

So far so good, I”m enjoying it. My vision of Doris was of a very weak mousy skinny girl, but the way Alpha describes her when he first sees her naked was quite the opposite. He said she had round full breasts and wide hips and that her body was beautiful. I felt like that was a bit of a contradiction . I like how the story gets you guessing who the murderer is. Also how Dorothy is connected to Anna. There are a few different sub stories going on which makes it jump around a bit but still a good read so far.