Rejected by my mate, claimed by Alpha Ryder Reviews

Love this story so much I love blade Julius and Ryder and Doris. I hate Lucious and Claire and all the evil ones I hope they get what they deserve. This is making me laugh, cry , get angry and scared all at once. I hope the bad guys die and the good ones win and we have a healthy happy baby boy they name after blade. I also hope Henry and Julius find their mate and can be happy and for Dora to be happy.

It was great. I read it all pretty quick. It kept me thinking from beginning to end. I guessed pretty quick who the bad guy was in the mask even before it was said in the book. I love the story line how she was nobody and became somebody. How after she was Luna she wanted to protect people from what she had been put theough. She was smart and strong . What they had taken from her all came back and she became stronger than ever. The story kept my interest from beginning to end.

I like how Ryder is trying everything for Doris and Doris seems weak but I love her hard work to get stronger. I don’t like the father figure of Doris because I think he had to do more for hes mate or hes daughter and not believe the rumours about hes mate. Only Henry is good brother he’s trying to support her😊 Keep up with the good work, all in all I’m in love with the novel ❤️❤️👍🏻

I'm enjoying the story so far, although it is a bit slow. And, in some places, too fast. Like they've barely spent any time together, except training. He wants her to trust him and start talking to him but he's not spending any time with her to earn her trust. And then all of a sudden she's talking to the head maid, who turns out to be her mother but she doesn't know that yet. I think the author needs to put more in to this story

The story is so well written. How the storyline unfolds. Each chapter leaves you in suspense,making you want to keep on reading. Absolutely love it. I like how the love story between Doris and Ryder develops, it's not rushed,it's purposeful, it's deep and true,and Ryder's devotion to his Luna,it's pure admiration. I'm in awe of how Doris's character is evolving, from being a timid shy woman to a strong,bold woman,who is finding her inner strength and voice. She's going to surprise alot of people, as the novel and story unfolds. She's a true Luna indeed.

I am Enjoying the story so far, there is good development of characters and plot. Im Keen to see where the story goes. There is Definetly a bit more thought behind the plot compared to some books on this app. Its definetly intrigued me enough to continue, I can't say the same for a lot on here. There is more to the damsel in distress storyline. I think it will be interesting to find out more of the lunas "gifts" and would love to see her kick some *ss

I have been hooked on this story since I started it. The transformation for Doris has been truly amazing and watching her bond with Ryder has been an amazing journey. I look forward to reading more each day. Finding out the characters secrets and past lives has made me wanting to keep learning more and more about them. I have been and will continue to root for this couple until the very end! Great job with this story! 💗

Although there were errors, I totally became engrossed in this book. I hate leaving reviews. But here we are, I had no choice. Whatever happened to Michael's mother? Is she still in the dungeons? Being wolfs, why couldn't they mindlink? Trying to think of what else to add. Did their clothes never fall off when they changed into their wolf forms? I'm sure these questions have been asked before but like I said, have to leave an 80 word review, minimum.

It was a pretty good book. The characters were well developed but at times, the book felt a bit chaotic. There were so many storylines developing at the same time, it was hard to keep up with what was going on. It took a long time to get to the point of the story. Also, the language and grammar changed back and forth that didn't flow properly. That said, the story and editing can be tightened up a bit. But I loved Ryder and Doris's storyline!

I like that it’s somewhat unexpected—you can’t stop reading because you never know what’s coming next. I’m not sure if it might get a bit boring at some point, but so far I’m really enjoying it. I also like the characters, even though I’ve read several books with a similar premise. It still manages to keep me interested, and I’m curious to see how everything develops. Hopefully it keeps the same pace until the end.