Pregnant and Banished from the Pack Reviews

Loved the story and the characters although a few questions arise in the beginning, if the packs are so far away how did Jake and Milan meet and also why did they never exchange names? I like Ava's character although she is a bit too mature for an eleven year old in my opinion. I do appreciate how they finally meet and reconcile but I feel the end is not really an end. It feels like there is at least two chapters missing. Otherwise good read

I’m getting confused from one chapter to the next. Is she a beta? An omega? Why did he leave her in the cave when she’s his mate? They’re both insecure characters. If she’s his mate, he wouldn’t tolerate on any level any disrespect from Taila or is it Talia? One moment their daughter is 11 the next she’s a teen. I think the author would have a great story, if it flowed a bit better. Try not to constantly repeat the same thing so often. Be more consistent.

Was a great read started with a bang and ended with one. While it was a great story I do wish there had been more action. The story line was good so it could have gone much farther with action that was played out throughout the story. Maybe another story with the way that Talia left the pack vowing to come back and make Jake pay could be a sequel with a lot of a tion will look forward to it coming out.

What a wonderful, thrilling read!!!! The suspense makes you yearn for more, I guess it continues to be written we see what type of family and pack both Milan and Jake raise.....did Alpha Scott find another mate? Did Talia try to come back and cause more trouble? Did Ava shift? What happened the prisoners in the rogues cells..... weuh so much suspense. In our next read let's avoid so much jumbled up theories...Ava is too young to advise the father on romance....

Thus far the novel is great. The character's are being developed well. It has moved rather quickly. The questions the main characters have about teachers feelings are endearing. The antagonist are staring to become many. I can clearly see several future plot ideas develop, but it's overt and I can't confirm. This is keeping me pulled in. Not sure if I like how the rouge attacked was handled or introduced, but I can make some good conjecture on how its all tied together. Lots of twist and turns.

So fa the book is going in the right direction. There are times where I feel like the writing is a little lackluster and needs a bit of speed and spice. There is repetition of the same sentence in one paragraph which makes it feel like the writer was filling up space. The antagonist is going off on the main character without any base. The mating pull is supposed to be strong but nothing happened from the first meeting at Milans house.

This novel so far of what I read is good, my thing is how can a pack do something like kick a member out of the pack because their Alpha cheated and rejected his mate? I can't wait to see what will happen to them in this new pack and if anything will get easier for the both of them or will they regret it. To me so far everything is going good but you never know until you finish reading the novel. Great app and great novel

I find this story interesting. It seems that there something going on that is not clear. This is just a feeling I have. I do not trust Talia. Jealousy making people nasty as the saying goes and I think Milan would be wise not to trust her. I also wonder when Milan will fully trust Jake. Did Alpha Scott only came to form an alliance or is there more to it? These are questions I have and I can't wait to read further to see what unfolds

Talia seems too possessive of Alpha Jake. The way she attacks Milan is too harsh. I would want Ava to get well grounded and groomed in the pack. Milan should fall in love with Alpha Jake so that the curse placed on him by the moon goddess can be erased and both of them should live happily ever after. But they should be wary of Talia. I believe she has a hand in Alpha Scott visiting the pack and asking for Milan in exchange for an alliance

I do like this book sometimes it hard to read but all in all it's pretty decent, I dont think she should of brought Scott back into the mix so soon but made it so he saw how good Milan became and watched her grow into a perfect luna seen all his mistakes make him suffer watching it not I want her back....she's been back 5 mins not done anything yet...she's a mum now that's about all that seems to have changed...when your a mum you grow as they do. But all in all an interesting read I look forward to reading more.