My Quarterback Alpha Reviews

The novel has a good story line but it needs editing a little but other than its very good. The tension, responsibility and love war happening is attracting and I'm hooked. I would say that the extra characters need also to be shown more but I get it that it's about the lead lovers. I love how they knew they were doomed with their feelings for each other but still don't want to let go😌😁. Finally I hope that the FL can get stronger and not depend on the ML or better her pack becoming strong so they don't have to go through being captured again.

I'm enjoying the book so far. I would say I'm hooked. I like the development of the main characters. Wondering how other characters are gonna play roles in the events the main characters are going thru. I hope they end up together. I hope Kai helps his team win the championship. I hope Aria helps her pack members to forgive and they can learn to live together if Kai and Aria become mates. The dinamics of the pack would change and her former pack members would have fair treatment again.

I loved this novel. It was sort of obvious with the tattoo for the reader, that Kia was the wolf that stopped her. But I like how the author explains his point of view even though it was towards the end. I was in tears when Kia explained his point of view of that night all the wolves that cried for their parents but they would never respond. The blood in the air. I hope it all works out. Too bad they can’t just run away together. Keep going please.

It’s very good so far; a few typos here & there but nothing that can’t be read through & still understand what was meant to be there. A little slow moving here & there; yet, overall, it’s a very enjoyable novel. Interesting characters from start to finish! The twists & turns are fairly unpredictable & keeps me on my toes while reading it. I love that there aren’t too many 1st round pick characters… it seemed to be early for bball practice to start yet.

Still not sure what to makeof this novel, things don't seem to add up there is definitely something strange about the whole set up. I'm not sure if I will finish this story it's dragging on with no rhyme or reason. Feel as if you're trying to create a cliff hanger but, not creating the right ambiance. It's obvious Kai's father is the big bad wolf and wants to turn him into the same murderous Alpha as himself but, can't figure out what the story is about besides that.

Ok so our girl has been captured by the ravens pack after her pack has been attacked at night, her mom and dad are in the dungeons with the rest of the parents, the young adults are being made to attend school and be servants to the ravens, Lots of questions remain unanswered hope the next chapters will uncover them and guessing that our girl is the mate of the alpha and that her best friend is also paired with the one she us tutoring

Is actual pre good read. Just with the chapter for each weren't so much. Bsishs bsishs encoc dj. J j j j j kk k k o o o o o k. J JJ j j j. Ko o o k h g t t t rr d s s d f g ii I j j j j g g FD d d d DD d d g. H jk k l k l l l l k k kh h h g g FD

I love the characters relationship development, even when their circles and people around them makes it harder. Or them to question their morals or own feelings. The story is nice and it's easy to just sink in. Even for someone whose native ain't english it is easy to stay inside the storyline and picture the telling and feelings It's been ling while for me to find this catching story that is hard to stop reading. Well done for this author!

Although filled with grammatical error and Kai having blonde hair then dark hair it was good. However, it’s surely not finished. I spent money buying chapters for half a book, no ending, just stopped. Very disappointing. What happened to Silvercrest freeing everyone from Ravencrest? What happened at the Final game? Does Aria get caught spying? Does Lila get back with Elliot? Does Tobias get his comupance? So many questions left unanswered. Plots left hanging, unfinished. How can you say this book is finished.

I enjoyed reading the novel with all its twist and turns I felt sorry for the characters because they generally care about each other but they are put in a terrible situation. Is there a reason the book is ending here instead of after the national contest and the face off between Kai and his dad, I was hoping she would get to meet his mother and the mother would come to her aid and would restore his family. I hope you plan on continuing as a separate novel since story has ended here leading us hanging.