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MISTAKEN: The Pack Slave Reviews

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Nichole L. Bellamy Overacker

Review after the novel completion

Live the twists... not giving anything out but a great read... gives you in site on how evil some people can be to get what they want... first you think gross and as it un folds you have a different perspective... some times you do not want to see it coming before you get to it... makes it more interesting that way... some stories I quit reading because I already know the ending ... i hope you enjoy this story

March 14, 2024
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Anyna Reed

Review after the novel completion

The fact this book has had me intrigued for 2 whole days none stop reading . I highly recommended this book you will fall in love and have you gripping your seat never know what to expect 100% the best book please read . Maverick has you perplexed and Mia finding herself is the best . I loved their silenced loved for one another I’m just in awe of the whole thing it really is the perfect read and will have you up all night

January 9, 2025
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Hinemoana

Review after half of the novel

The spelling and grammar isn’t particularly great and is quite distracting from the story. That said, most of the time you can make the gist of it out. Strange character development - it’s not really believable that someone (Auder) could go from being so vicious and brutal to being almost kind and tolerant - unless it’s just in his own self interest. And we don’t know his full agenda towards Mia yet. Really don’t know how her mate could honestly sit back and let some of the things happen. He doesn’t seem quite believable either. Intriguing to know what really happened that fatal day and other unanswered questions. So I’ll soldier on through despite the poor writing.

January 8, 2025
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Melanie Dunn-Fiedler

Review after the novel completion

This story had great potential but sadly missed the mark on several occasions. The author had us readers waiting for any type of true character development of the main figures. Instead we were served up soap opera twists and turns to the last chapter. We started out with a heroine who suffered dreadfully and ended with a heroine who was mean and petty to her staff. We started with a hero who started out clueless but never once attempted to protect the heroine. He kept leaving her in harm‘s way. We had an antihero who treated the heroine shabbily despite knowing that energy would rebound back to him. He was delusional to the point where it made no sense at all. We had an alpha and Luna who were one dimensional puppets, yet the author kept adding more and more characters to the storyline. Instead we were had to ask myself many times, why am I reading this? What do I expect from this werewolf rejected mate genre? What I expect is a sympathetic heroine. She gets rejected, yes. There are many ways to get rejected and reasons. The heroine may suffer because of the rejection or at the hands of her ex-mate. Then there are two possibilities- the ex-mate can regret it and attempt to win her back. Here we expect to see some accountability, taking responsibility and a good heartfelt grovel. Secondly, the heroine can get a second chance mate. This can be someone else who will treat her as everyone in the story deserves. Yes here was some political intrigue but it shouldn’t come at the expense of servicing the genre. If the story is good, we don’t mind the grammatical mistakes. Please, do better.

January 4, 2025
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Kenija LV

Review after the novel completion

Loved the story! There were a lot of twists and turns. I wish there was at least a little of what happened in the following years. I just wish it was a little longer and had more info of maybe the next year of their life before skipping to 7 years later. Like did Mais mom and dad ended up getting together? How did she do as a Luna. How did they react to the news that they are having babies. So many things. But I really loved the story.

January 4, 2025
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Yolo

Review after half of the novel

The storyline is good, enough to keep me reading with paid ads. I am curious where the writer is trying to take us. My biggest issue and real trouble is the poor grammar, lack of continuation in details, and very short paragraphs. It is like it was written by AI in another language and then translated. We also don't need a million POV chapters that are all the same scene. It is frustrating and feels like the story is not moving along.

December 23, 2024
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Marlene morris

Review after half of the novel

While the story is decent, the English language has been slaughtered. The incorrect spelling and just plain wrong words being used make the novel a difficult read at best. I am an advanced reader and even I have to go back and reread some sections. Anyone with less reading skills will likely be unable to get through the novel. I would suggest an editor that speaks English as a first language. As I said the story itself is not bad. I think if the language issues were fixed it would be a good read.

December 15, 2024
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Sammie

Review after half of the novel

I want to like it so badly, but it’s so hard to read with how many errors there are. If it was properly edited I bet it would be a wonderful story. It desperately needs to be edited. There are points were it seems you back track but didn’t make sure you deleted everything you made changes too, and it makes the story very confusing. Also there are just completely wrong words being used in some sentences, and it’s repetitive. Again I think this would be a great book if it got properly edited so please don’t stop writing.

December 10, 2024
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Kim

Review after the novel completion

This was a beautiful story. ❤️ . . . . . My compliments to the author of this book 📖 . . . . . I really enjoyed reading this book. 📝 . . . . . You did an amazing job. . . . . The storyline was nice and kept my interest the whole time. . . . . 📔 📙 📗 📘 📓 📕 🖊️ ✒️ . . . . . . . . . .

December 4, 2024
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Kat

Review after half of the novel

I love this story. AUDER is the worst but I love it. I find myself rooting for Ric and Mia over and over. I hope Isabella gets what she deserves. Mean people always get what's coming to them and she is no different. The curse tie is fascinating and a new twist I had never heard of. I can't wait to see what happens next. Only half way through.

November 18, 2024
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