MISTAKE WITH THE ALPHA Reviews

So far I am enjoying this story. I wish the chapters were a little bit longer and it would be nice if the story wasn't so slow to make progress. I am looking forward to continuing to reading this story. Sometimes the story seems to jump from perspective a bit to much for my liking. I enjoy reading stories about women being strong so I'm wondering how strong or confident the main character will become throughout this storyline. So far I'm not convinced she will succeed.

Absolutely loved it . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Thank you this is the best book I've read in a while. Tell do you have more books on here? I don't think Sam will forgive him for this. I hope finds mate after all she's been thru. I think she may fall this other guy. I can't wait to finish some more of this book. I think I to read some more of your books. I'm disabled and really enjoy reading more than watching TV. I don't think I've sat and watched a movie in long time.

J’ai beaucoup aimé ce livre. Chaque chapitre donne envie de découvrir la suite, si bien qu’on devient vite accro à l’histoire et très attaché aux personnages. Les différents points de vue apportent une vraie richesse au récit et permettent de mieux comprendre les émotions et les vécus de chacun. Même si certains passages sont un peu répétitifs, cela ne gâche en rien le plaisir de lecture. Les rebondissements sont bien présents et rythment l’intrigue, même si certains mériteraient parfois un peu plus de développement. J’aurais notamment apprécié plus de détails lors de leur première fois, pour rendre ce moment plus fort et marquant.

The book has been great so far. I have been waiting for Jaylen or Sam get a mate. I thought it would be later in the novel. I think she's going to end up pregnant by the Alpha. I can't wait to see how Jaylen new mate handles him being in love with Sam. I hope she starts training again. I think a lot of warriors will be more than happy to watch her run and work out. I think the new mate will try and bully her.

I love this storyline and can’t wait to see who the Alpha chooses. I am also curious as to why Drey looked at the Gemma suspiciously during the party and why he mentioned the stealing of the mate to Sam. Makes me wonder what he knows or suspects? 🤔🤔 The only complaint I have is with the writing; lack of spacing when going into another characters POV and some grammatical errors makes it a little confusing for me and I have to reread.

I enjoyed reading this book 📚 alot 😉 a little too much cruelty but the revenge was Real ♨️💯 The romance scenes were raw and well thought out 👍Some parts had a little redundancy especially when the characters repeated scenes in New chapters 🤔 I liked the descriptions of the changing from human to wolf 🐺 🦊 and vice versa 😉 the fights were also epic 🔥 I loved the part when Sam changed into her wolf on the stage in front of everyone and then healed ALL the sick and wounded people who the witch 🧙‍♀️ inflicted 🥳🎉💯

I love the storyline. I love the characters. But I hate Bullies. Too much evil plotting around. The Gemma was jealous he did not get more than he should have. Drey, told Sam the truth. She did not grab a hold of what he shared. The Alpha was so bent on finding his mate, he was ripe for manipulation. I am always on the side of Love and Truth!!!... Great Story and to discover how Wonderful Zul is. I like him, Drey and Prince Brock very much. Sam becoming a great Fighter was alsi perfect.

So far this novel is fantastic. Great story line to make you want to keep reading. However it’s a bit annoying with name mix ups, in proper grammar and spelling. I have also noticed that the chapters get shorter. I feel cheated when the next chapter starts the way the previous chapter ended. There is no need to start a chapter out how the previous one ended. Chapters start at five to six pages then start getting shorter from there, thus costing you more coins.

Nice to see actual love not in all stuff is it written about also I think she is his true mate not the pineapple girl not to be rude but the whole distant 3rd party is kind throwing the story a bit but I hope we get to see the antagonist soon I mean they can't stay hidden forever now he has a "mate" so I will need to see what soon develops but over all good so far friends