Littile bites, Alpha Reviews

I'm not sure, but I think I've read this before, but not on here, and I can't think where it could have been. We'll other then that lol so far it's a good read. The main character so far seems to have a few temper issues lol I don't blame her, but surely she could be handling things differently. There where some wording choices that took me a few to figure out what you where trying to say, and also some word choices I think you could improve on. Over all not a bad read.

Good story about a slave who suddenly becomes a Luna, but it’s a circuitous route to that title. Apparently, our werewolf is special, but we don’t know what that is. For some reason, she is deemed “full of hate,” because she actively stands up for herself and won’t abide disrespect. And the way she outsmarted the witch to get her friend back was brilliant. Sadly, her alpha doesn’t trust her at all, and there are lots of arguments between them. As she lives with her mate, she learns that she is special and that she has powers. These develop very slowly, and cause serious problems for her and the beings around her. She learns that a war is coming, for which she must prepare. And she must go on a quest to find a special artifact. It’s an interesting story. But I will say Author has serious problems using the correct gender pronoun when referring to its antecedent. Tense and word usage is also problematic, which makes the story confusing and interrupts the flow. Still a good read, though.

Sehr Tolles Buch dass sich gut liest. Leichtes schreibstil, gut verständlich und spannend. Das Buch ist spannend und Action geladen. Aber es gibt auch tolle emotionale und erotische Szenen. Bin gespannt wie es weitergeht und auf das Ende. Die Charaktere sind sehr interessant und vielschichtig aufgebaut. Es macht wirklich Spaß das Buch zu lesen. Freue mich auf das Ende und bin gespannt wie es endet und sich die Charaktere weiterentwickeln. Würde sehr gerne mehr von der Autorin lesen zu können weil sie so einen leichten und anziehenden Schreibstil hat! Hat mich echt sehr beeindruckt. Bin gespannt auf mehr Bücher von ihr!

Looking forward to see how the story pans out. There are a lot of book slash novels slash e books that start off with the weak and or unsuspecting female lead character is abused or violated(not always sexually- i do not really enjoy that kind of content but lets be real it happens) to be marked unsuspectingly or unwillingly is not as bad(to humans!) gotta laugh. I read a story where the dad or step dad marked and she was in pain - but waiting on content!

I was really enjoying this novel until I got to the end. To say I am disappointed is an understatement. The storyline was going at a decent pace but the last couple of chapters seemed rushed. I feel that it could have ended better. Even to have an epilogue that would some how extend the story to better clarify how everyone ended up. After everything they all went through to have it come to a sudden stop, didn't really provide any closure for someone who was invested in the story.

Pues estuvo un poco clara por momentos. Hubo demasiados reclamos, engaños, peleas inmaduras. Poca acción en algunos capítulos, por momentos un tanto infantil. Y la verdad, el final se me hizo triste y me dejó un mal sabor de boca. De nada sirvió el intentar hacer las cosas bien entre Riana y Lucían, para terminar así. La pregunta siguiente es: habrá continuación para un posible "final feliz"?...espero que si y que queden algunas cosas más claras. Y otra cosa, porque razón tuvo que marcarla sin explicarle bien.

Cannot believe I wasted my time reading that. Worst story line ever. The spelling made it hard to read and understand. The story line was very confusing amd hard to follow. The war they needed to partake in camp from left field. It was hard to make sense of what the war was about. Now she's dead and the story just ends. At the hand of her mom no less who was hidden as her mates adopted sister. Not to mention they hinted that the beta female is possibly her sister. Let's not make any sense of any of it. Let's just kill her and be done with it.

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I absolutely love this book. I’ve not been able too stop reading it. It’s truly well written I highly recommend reading it you’ll love it , it has everything you need from a love story to warewolves, vampires and of cause magic, I’m looking forward to finding out what Lucy’s secret is and why she’s cast the spells that she has and what about raine is there more to her than even she knows , hopefully she’ll have a happy ending as she deserves one .

So far it's a pretty decent read. Some parts could be a little bit better written as far as clarity of who's doing what and explaining what's happening. Definitely needs a bit more character development for the lead character. Still got quite a bit left to read so hopefully the author pulls the story together so everything makes sense and has a conclusion that really wraps it up for the reader. Guess I will update my review once I actually get to finish the book.