He's My Mate Reviews

It was a good story but some holes in it that didn’t connect. I do hate the she wolves jealousy because it was predictable and I think you can make a story without it. I think the story needs proofreading again lots of mistakes is made . There’s many chapters that repeated and I guess the book would have been shorter and better if the mistakes are corrected. I wish the writer good luck in the future and hopefully get to read something more….

I enjoyed this novel although it seem to have been translated into English by a monkey at times. The grammar was very poor so hard to understand at times. The story line was well thought out and presented and could have been expanded on more. One area that surprised me was why go back and repeat three chapters totally unnecessary. And where did Axel's uncle come from. There had been no mention of him and why was he a rouge wolf?

I am really enjoying reading this story so much so that I am having difficulty putting it down! It is an excellent and very much unexpected follow on from the first novel in the series, The twists and turns just keep on coming. The story line has been well thought out and what you expect to happen just doesn’t- in fact more often than not it turns out to be the exact opposite which leaves you feeling compelled to carry on reading. I am already looking forward to reading book number three!

This story is so good and there are so many twist and turns that makes it almost impossible to stop reading. That her twin sister is a monster towards her is heartbreaking, but she stands her ground and grows with her powers into a beautiful woman who knows who she is and what she wants. The fact that she has two mates makes it even more exiting. And that their full potential is only fulfilled when they all are mated. I absolutely love this story.

This is a great story. I’m so sad that the two sisters don’t get along. I cannot believe how evil Vanessa is. I just got through reading the story about their parents and can’t believe what has happened with their children. Very sad. And also how evil Axel’s mom is and how his father died thinking he would be putting an end to everything and only having to died in vain. I really hope nothing happens to the child that Vanessa is carrying.

This is the second book in the series and it’s really good. Like the continuation of the characters from the first book. I would love to read continuation of the three children. You did a great job in bringing the character a to life. And adding some different werewolf history that I hadn’t seen for, but which I like. Your descriptions were well thought out, and I could see the book in my head. Keep writing you’re really good. Thanks.

So good the characters are awesome! I love the three mates together. I can’t wait to see what h a p p e n s n e x t I hate that the s i s t e r s d o n o t g e t a l o n g and t h a t o n e of t h e m is e v i l and th e i r p a r e it’s have to choose

What an awesome story. So many different elements to the characters. The author truely has a vivid imagination. Loved all the twists and turns that the characters faced was absolutely enthralling. Found it hard to find a place to put it down. I loved the idea of elemental wolves who had different powers. Hope there is a sequel so we can find out what the children inherit from their parents. Do they have all or some of the gifts from their parents?? Great read

Absolutely loved it . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

I loved loved this story. Some characters took some warming up to, Axel proved himself to be a worthy mate. I am impressed with Hector’s character the youngest but by far the most caring, supportive, loyal and straightforward one of the three. Athena my heart bled for her throughout the story. I loved how they worked together to defeat Sheila. And to see Athena morph into a much stronger being was amazing. Vanessa is a whole different beast. To believe that she held so much hate and jealousy in her whole being for her own twin is beyond scary. Felt so bad for Axel losing Thor in the end, but I realize that Thor scarified himself to save Axel, but still sad. I look forward to reading more from this author.