Desired By Two Alphas: The Unwanted Luna Reviews

A very interested story. I enjoyed the read. I loved when she finally told them who she really was. Loved when she finally stood up to her terrible sister and so happy so got the happiness she deserved. Probably keep track of names next time because there was random names put in place they should not be. Otherwise it was a very good book and written well. It got so hooked and I couldn’t put my phone down cause it just kept drawing me in.

Good in parts but very slow in places. Rushed at the end where evil is defeated and all loose ends tied up in 2 chapters. There's 50+ chapters after 102 that just repeat the story from the previous 100 on the premise of telling Edna - which just came across as a filler and doesn't add anything at all in the retelling. It just results in the story and relationships not being advanced or changed for a big chunk. I can't recommend, sorry!

Fantastic story. Enjoying reading it. The author writes well. Unfortunately it does need typos editing as there are several spelling errors, and so forth which sadly do take away from otherwise a fun interesting read which this story is. It is light, fun, interesting has sections of suspense and very difficult to out down. Clearly a great job from the author. The pace is good too as the story is not excessively dragged out. Cost of the book could be an issue but seems most of these books are in that price range. Job well done author