Claiming The Hidden Alpha Reviews

The plot for the story is very good I love a mystery mixed with fantasy about a hidden identity that is later revealed. But this one is taking forever to get us there and it’s very repetitive and poorly written. I am trying g to persevere to see if it gets better but I feel it’s getting worse. The errors in writing are ruining it for me. Poor sentence structure grammar errors and mixing up pronouns is just too hard to overlook.

For now i like the story. Its one of the kind dat you wonne keep reading. I havent read much chapters, so i can't say really much. Not yet. But for now i think its gonna be a great story till the end. I hope so 😀 i'm gonna read till the end and then i hope that i get the chance to make a New review so i can tell more of the story. But for New i like it already.

So far very good and well written. I find the book refreshing and anything than ordinary because normally the male character is the strong one. The one with power and the female character develops some kind of power. But this time it is the other way. I like the character development so far and the storyline. But I kinda miss a „villain“. By now the only one seems to be Mable but she is not the kind of villain I would expect. Maybe she isn’t Or she will grow into this role. I‘m excited!