Claimed by The Cursed Alpha King Reviews

I loved this novel it took my on a rollercoaster ride for sure I'm glad that ava got her happily ever after she deserved it but I feel like there is something more that should be written about the story like more to her story as luna and a mother would like to see maybe another book the end was a cliff hanger it's left me wanting more. What ever happened to Catherine's story and her mate and now Kathy she needs a story or too.

I wished it didn't end the way it did. The words used to describe the food was good, however it didn't have to be all the time Ava tried new foods. I enjoyed the friendships Ava created. I wish there were more storyline from Xaviers perspective. I liked that there wasn't alot of violence compared to other stories. I also enjoyed that there wasn't alot of sexual encounters. It was a wholesome story. The writer was very descriptive and didn't have Grammer mistakes like other stories I've read. Just wished it was longer, many storyline possibilities left unwritten.

Stuck through the novel even though the constant details of the same things kept occurring, like brushing teeth or bathing. The storyline of the plot was interesting and I liked the constant changes on circumstance, but then the ending was just disappointing. The ending is where the detail should've been to fully close the novel. Perhaps doing a 2 years later part to show where Ava is now and whether she's happy rather than just cutting it off at them hugging.

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I love this novel however there is too much details about the food she eats the place she sees it's like taking up the novel and there is not much action going on. I hope as I read further that there will be more action and love going on in the near future. I love the fact that she was running away and ran straight into her parents arms after all the years of being missing however I would love to see the relationship of her family grow

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This book had the potential to be good.. it can do wit less descriptions i mean how many shower scenes and food descriptions do we need.. and Ava is annoying i mean why does she think Xavier is going to kill her with no real reason to think so. There was also so many name mixup which was also annoying. There could have been better editing. There was so much muttering in the book i mean come on these are Kings and Alphas that's doing so much muttering.

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I like the story line and the characters, especially Catherine. Nothing gets past that girl,a little bossy and glad she's close to AVA(ATHENA)and helping guide her. I'm glad she has found her family and are reunited. It was a surprise that Alpha King also knew her family and how close he was to Athenas mother. Her trust issues were driving me crazy. I like everything about this book except for the describing of all the food,the rooms she's been in,her clothes she's wearing or someone else. Describing his pj's was funny and can't imagine him wearing them. I'm glad she stood up for herself against Michelle. Can't wait to read how their story ends.

The story line is a good one - makes you want to know what happens. BUT - and it’s quite a big bit for me - I don’t appreciate or understand the numerous distractions from the key story with pages and pages of totally unnecessary and ridiculously florid descriptions of people clothes, hairdos, bedrooms and other rooms, bathing and lots more. I am wondering if the author is being paid by the word or has never gotten over school teachers asking for more descriptive vocabulary. PLEASE just tell the story.