Alpha's Rejected Mate: Returning With His Heir Reviews

This novel started off a little slow to me. It took a few chapters before capturing my interest. I ended up very interested to see what was coming next. I really loved the characters their unique personalities and the way the author brought out their strengths and their weakness. I really liked the story line and I loved the happy ending. I admired the strength of Bella she was a survivor and she overcame lots to finally get her man. I would definitely read another novel by this author.

I enjoyed this novel. Thank you for sharing your talent. I had the impression that English was a second language though. Irregardless, you have a gift for storytelling. The love that Bella and Devon shared was heartwarming. I thought that Trevor was going to turn out to be a villain from the beginning but you made him into a vile creature. I liked that Bella and her father were reunited in the end. What I did not appreciate were the pages and pages consisting of only a few lines and large gaps between them. Otherwise, please continue writing more.

I am really enjoying this story. It is different from the others I have read. I love her strength and independence. She doesn’t allow Devon to bully her. Devon is gorgeous and I can’t wait to read when they get together. Her protection of her son is beautiful but I love that she doesn’t only think of herself. She is taking Devon and her son’s feelings into consideration as well. The story is well written and very descriptive which makes it a pleasure to read

Loving the plot and story line so far, can’t wait to read more Loving the plot and story line so far, can’t wait to read more Loving the plot and story line so far, can’t wait to read more Loving the plot and story line so far, can’t wait to read more Loving the plot and story line so far, can’t wait to read more Loving the plot and story line so far, can’t wait to read more

I had to force myself to finish this book just so I could change my review and hopefully save someone else a lot of time this is the worst book I have read nothing is consistent and there are way to many errors to count not to mention several chapters wasted on random rambling that honestly the book would be better without. I definitely would not recommend this book to anyone else nor would I be interested in reading anymore from this author

Bella's relationship with alpha Devon is quite strange. You can see that there's a pull in her heart for him.But also, the pain that he caused is something that she can't forget or get past. I hope because they have a son together that they can figure out things.And work together to raise him.She deserves to be treated better. But I wonder what will happen when his father his back healthy. Will he still make his son leave her, and what about his grandchild? Can't wait for the rest of the story. Great job to the author

Good story but a whole load of typos and he instead of she. Story beginning to drag a little and wondering why Alpha Devon did not send people to follow Sara knowing how evil , desperate and conniving she is. And his dad Gabriel.. what a seriously stubborn idiot all bark and no common sense. The beta also should be wise and forward thinking. To not have a solid opinion to aid his alpha is disappointing for a pack so strong. And the rogue king to be caught so easily….. let’s see how the story unfolds.

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Great book! Couldn't wait to finish it. There were so many plot twists in the book that I did not see coming that added to the suspense and intrigue. I'm glad that Bella and Devon found their happily ever after and Sir Gabriel came around in the end. Would love a sequel to this to find out more about Bella and Devon, but also would love to find out more about Ariana and Alex and Alpha Franklin and his mate. I would love to find out about Franklin finding love in the end.

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