Alpha's Last Minute Bride Reviews

The story was good, but was a little hard to follow bc of all the grammatical errors & language snafus. You really need to use grammerly or get an editor. It would definitely make the story easier to follow. Please take this as constructive criticism and not someone trying to be mean. Otherwise your story was good. It was very creative and entertaining. The story was good, but was a little hard to follow bc of all the grammatical errors & language snafus. You really need to use grammerly or get an editor. It would definitely make the story easier to follow. Please take this as constructive criticism and not someone trying to be mean. Otherwise your story was good. It was very creative and entertaining.

The story was interesting but the language and grammar are pretty dreadful. It gets quite confusing with he/she and POV’s. The book morphs from werewolf to lycan to vampire. Then time travel gets thrown in. No “prime directive” in this universe. The main character time travels trying to fix things. Everyone ends up dead but with the time change are they really dead? I liked that there was story and not just rude pages endlessly. That was a real Plus. Also positive was it being a normal length book not endless.

Fabulous. I couldn’t put the book down. I had to read it to the end without stopping. I throughly enjoyed the characters especially Evangeline. She is a strong character mentally and physically. Thankfully she was able to use her Alpha powers to get everyone to follow her lead and carry through with her plans. I thought it wonderful that Daniel left himself a to do list for their future. Less fighting but hopefully still some fun in making up and learning about the other. The villain twist was surprising. I liked that the supernatural characters came together to win.

Loved the novel, and really wanted it to continue. There were mystery, intrigue and so much more. I enjoyed all aspects of the novel. Although fiction, there were aspects, I'm sure some people can relate to. It's a story of love and loss, which all of us know. I would have preferred some more, especially finding out what the new scenario of the alternate live will be. I can't wait to find out what might be next to read. We'll done

An engaging intersting story which nicely blends warewolf, vampire& time travel. Its a story which move forward with equally powered male & female leads. Subplots are carefully put not creating much confusions to the main story line. The subplots are actually making the story line intriguing. Author have kept unnecessary drama out of the context and have focused on continuing the story line in a proper way.All characters were creating needed impact. Angel and Dan found their happines in the end.

Very good. There is a satisfying ending. Unexpected magic. it is a Quick read. It was too short. Loved the romance. Words words words. And Words words words and. Words words words and. words, words words There should not have a minimum word limit. I’m not sure I’ll ever leave another review. words words words words and words. words. words. words. And more words. Apricot Baseball Chicken Dodge Elf Find Ghost Host Igloos Jayhawks Keep Life Mine Night

To me this seems like an original storyline, refreshing change from the runaway mate the unrequited love theme and the evil sister as a main character. I also really liked the lead characters (both human and their wolves(Roman and ivory)). However, I think the story and characters could have been developed more in the last 20 chapters. But at the same time I liked the length of the story, 57 chapters is great length. It took a lot of skill to wrap up that much story in the last few chapters.

Great Novel, took me three days to finish Reading it. A very exciting Novel with all the twists and turns. His Angel a hybrid Lycan and part vampire. A lot of family dynamics and, magical powers with the vampires and also angel as a white Lycan and also being part vampire. Angel, could go back and forth through time and space. You are a great Author and looking forward to other books that you will write. I know I will enjoy reading.

A good story line and moderately paced. I enjoyed reading the book as it does not drag on like most book that keep the main character accident prone to prolong the story. Although the translation is a bit off, you stay with it because of the plot and pace. There is a good twist that makes you guess who the true villain is. I would have liked that the relationships the heroine has were written in depth, all in all it was still a good read.

This Novel is about a lycan hybrid vampire! I love the story line and plot twist! Its so unpredictable and has you on your toes! One moment we're laughing than we're cryinv or frustrated. The supporting characters were charismatic and awesome. The chapters were good lengthy and very interesting. I binged read this book in a day that should tell you how good this book is. If you're looking for an interesting and thrilling novel short and worth while. This is the novel for you! Kudos to the author well done👏