Alpha Logan's Chosen Luna Reviews

What to say? Parts are good and some parts are to rushed. It is intense at times but in total I guess it balances out, and in total it was an ok read. I have read the novel a bit pice by pice, so my memory of the plot is a bit haze for me now that this review is to be written. A consequence of this is that a good review is hard to write, in total if my memory serves me right, this novel is Worth the time and effekt to read.

The story was descent. Need to have better transitions from one scene to the other. There needs to be better editing and spell checking. The characters are flat. The ending is to abrupt. This is all that have to say about this story. If you want more from me that not going to happen the rest of this bullshit just to got get this over with remember what I said about editing that was an example what meant. Now I have the word count.

Omg! I can’t seem to put this one down it’s that good! The build up is a bit slow but enough to grab your attention and wanting more. I feel like it is easy to read and Easy to understand the characters. My page turning kept me up into the early morning hours wanting more and excited to read what happens next. I felt an array of emotions as the characters face different challenges and emotions themselves. Definitely pour a glass of wine and plan some time because you’re not going to want to put this down.

I really like the twists and turns of this book. I have stayed captivated thus far and it makes me want to read more as it’s definitely a page turner. I enjoy the development of the characters. There are some grammatical errors where I have to reread to ensure I’m reading about the right character; however, I have been able to follow along with it being a major issue. In fact, I have read half the book in 2 days.

Was a really good book. I enjoyed it. The end came a bit predictable but overall it was a really good book. Some of the chapters was extremely good I have to say and I couldn't help but purchase. Can't wait to see what is next or even of the writer has any other books that was written. Hopefully there are a few more of the locals of the werewolves. They are not often written of descendants of them. Thank!

Lots of grammar mistakes. The story line is ok but progresses very slow for me. They do move it along by thing like for weeks working in the lab or for over half a month Logan was gone but they video called nightly. I did not realize that 8 months had passed because I was thinking they were still 3 months in and had very little progression on their relationship. They spend little to NO time together to develop any type of chemistry.

The story was good. It kept me guessing and there was a decent amount of action. However the ending, if we can even call it that left a lot to be desired. It felt incomplete, not quite a cliff hanger just an seems like the author ran our of pages to fully get a reader closure. Cynthia isn't my ideal of a strong female lead but I've come across much worst so can't really complain there. The author can probably reopen the story to give one more chapter to properly wrap the story up. That would satisfy most readers including me

The story was great it gets and captures your attention at the very beginning. Heartache, sorrow, action, pain and great triumph are in this story. The twist and plots in this story doesn't give it justice I just wished the ending have more detail on how Logan could have had an happier ending with Cynthia. How they could have resolved the complication between them and maybe could have had some little wolf pups 🐺 would have been cool to seen hence now the curse ended with Cynthia! There was so much more the author could have done with the ending but in conclusion overall great book just wished I could have read more of it. Thanks to the author for the reading material great work thanks again for the great read!!!!!!!!

I like the storyline. The book become brtter and better. The twist and turns capture you in and you have to read more. Unfortuantly it is not finishen so we never got to Knowles what happens in the end. This is not the first book I halve read on thos app ehich not get finishen. SDly for the many eho have used money on this. Mayby its time to the app to do so ething about it. I w

The characters in the story portraid the live for each other especially with each other. It is a very good storyline and shows that love always wins in the end. It is a bit grimm with all the murders and how it is happening but goes to show there is always evil but in the end the good will always win and survive over the bad. Very likeable and enjoyable story, but preferably not for girls under twenty five. Please keep writing, you sure has a lot more f talent.